Hi!

First of all, good job! I have started reading around 10pm (in my country time) and just thanks to you I went to sleep at 5 am because I couldn't stop reading! And it is not something that happens to me many times when I just take a pause from my stories I am writing, haha ^^ So that means I really enjoyed it from the bottom to the top.

You know me very well for being biased for Jjong as top!

I can fully understand you with the struggle in language - as well, english is not my first, but keep on going! I promise you that in a few weeks, months you will start finding mistakes and errors in your stories - just like I do XD

I loved how the story was slowly outburning and outgoing, especially first chapters about fighting between JongYu, haha, poor Jjongie. Can't imagine always so shiny soft Jinki as bad guy, but I loved him in this fanfic!

Good job, hwaiting in your next projects!
♥ Zumie ♥

Chapter 32: OMG A Happy Ending 🥰
What a cute and lovely family. Glad that Jonghyun fulfilled his promise he made with Jinki's mum
He is so kindhearted and lovely, I want a Jonghyun too 😂
Jinki changed a lot , compare to his personality from beginning. He got his parents married again, and completed his family. He realised importance of emotions and relations .
And what a hot love making, Jongyu were streaming hot and y . Lol I'm worried about Jjong though 😂
Thank you so much for a lovely JongYu Fic and your efforts and hard work ♥️
You Did Well 😊
Can't wait to read another lovely story from you
Take care ❤️

Chapter 32: The end is just perfect, Jonghyun really changed Jinki into soft caring lover from ruthless person. He even succeed in marrying Jinki's parents. Their family moments were so touching and beautiful 🥰
And Oh My God ...Jongyu's love making after marriage, so hot and perfect. My Jongyu heart is so satisfied and full. Jinki just couldn't get enough of his loving wifey, he is so whipped 🤣
This journey was amazing. We have seen all of them gone through tough time. But at the end they realised their mistakes and fixed them .
I noticed how much you improved during this fic , your English got better and better with each chapter.
I wish you good luck in your work ❤️
Thank you so much for your hard work and efforts 😊
Thank you for writing JongYu ♥️♥️

Chapter 31: The beginning when Jongyu make out wow . I love their emotional yet hot time . It was totally thrilling the way all members behaved with Jonghyun and Jinki , omg Minho was scary and angry for the first time in this fic . I felt relieved that it's all pretending.
And Jinki is completely changed now , the way he remained clam and controlled anger is a proof of that . They are married now , I didn't expect it but it was great . The way Jonghyun thinking about Jinki's parents in the middle of their y time just touched my heart, He is so precious and soft 🥺
I really enjoyed the chapter, can't wait for more ❤️
Thank you for sharing this one 🥰🥰

Chapter 31: Omg Jongyu heartfelt moments and they kissed and make out finally. Oh my Jongyu heart ❤️
Minho scared me by sudden display of anger like this. The way Taemin and Key behaved with Jonghyun rudely made me surprised for real . Even his Mom and Dad also acted so coldly towards him .
Glad to know that they're pretending so Jonghyun tell truth by himself.
Awww and the way Jinki proposed Jonghyun and asked him to Marry... that's warmed my heart.
They are married and together now . Jonghyun is so kindhearted and precious, he thinks about Jinki's parents even it was their first night. He is soft .

This chapter was so good. It was perfect for beginning to end ❤️❤️

Can't wait for upcoming chapter .. Thank you 🥰

Chapter 30: Woww , such a long chapter hahaha
But I enjoyed it so far 😊
Now I see everything getting sorted out. Jonghyun realised his mistake and realised his heart belongs to only Jinki . Meanwhile Minho and Key also gets more close. I never thinked that Minho knew everything from so long time . He kept everything at himself.

Waiting for Jonghyun and Jinki became together again. They had suffered a lot . They deserve happiness now ❤️

Thank you for such a good story and update .
Can't wait to read another chapter ♥️

Chapter 29: Welcome back :)
Don't worry, I really waited for update on this fic.
Coming to fic .... What's wrong with Jonghyun. He was so sophisticated and warm hearted person, but now he is just doing wrong, not only with himself but with Jinki , Minho and Unknowingly with Key too .
Goshh ... He engaged with Minho .
Poor Jinki . I really felt bad for him. That's the relief that he doesn't gave up yet .

Exited for next chapter....

Chapter 30: Minho knows everything 😯Wow what a twist

Finally Minkey ♥️

And I can sense Jonghyun realised that he was being so foolish. Excited to read upcoming Jongyu too ;)

Finally things getting sorted out

Thank you for update 🥰🥰

Chapter 29: I must say Taemin is a very good observer and smart. He convinced Key too , it was a little bit fire between Minho and Jinki , Jinki improved a lot . He made anger under his control now which is great change. But from few chapters we witnessed of Jjong's anger , haha
Excited to see what happens now

Chapter 28: Jonghyun is angry, which makes sense because Jinki broke his heart and hurt him deeply. But Jonghyun doesn’t realise that his anger had made him blind and he doesn’t see how he is hurting four people- himself because his heart still beats for Jinki, Jinki because Jinki regrets his actions and has learned his lesson, Minho because Jonghyun just wants to marry him to get back at Jinki, Key is also hurt because he loves Minho for real and would never do anything to hurt Minho.

Poor Minho, believes that Jonghyun wants to marry him out of love. He will be heartbroken if he will find out the truth. Hopefully Jinki will stop the wedding so four people lives are not ruined.

Taemin knows that something is up. He won’t let bad things to happen to Jonghyun and Kibum. He will help his brother to achieve his real love- Minho.

Good job, your writing has greatly improved, you use lot of different words to describe things and your vocabulary has become bigger. Good job!