A Tearful Farewell

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You were mean, until the end you're so mean! 
You loved me, without even realizing that you didn't love me anymore. 

You know how much it torturing me?
How much longer should I suffer? 

That time, I should've to noticed you more, 
and loved you more...

Then I'd be the only one who feel heartbroken..    
Until I forgot about you.

Until I let you go without any regret.

 

Foreword

Hello~ this story was inspired by Onestar's song (Im Han Byul) A Tearful Farewell. If you're a Baekhyun stan, I bet you all know this song right? If you don't know then go check it out first before coming to read this! (To get more emotion) This song was my favorite song and so I decided to write something based on this song. Please let me know if you cried after reading this because myself cried when I wrote this. I apologize for any grammatical error because english is not my first time. If any of you want to help me fixing my grammar, please direct message me. Thank you!  

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SkyeButterfly #1
Chapter 2: Aw I thought this was an extra chapter or epilogue, but PLEASE DON'T DELETE THIS STORY! It was more than good enough. Even if you don't get a response, you should keep your work posted -- not just for someone to find one day but also for yourself. I read some comments saying that maybe you can fix the grammar or have someone beta-read this, and I agree with that. The story wasn't bad at all. Please don't be discouraged!
SkyeButterfly #2
Chapter 1: Thank you for writing this story!!!!
SkyeButterfly #3
Chapter 1: NOOOOOO this was so sad. His letter was poignant and sweet, in spite of all the sadness that he wrote it with.
SkyeButterfly #4
This looks interesting 👀 I'll be reading.
noonimm #5
Chapter 1: wow.. ok.. woah i'm getting so emotional.

At first, I though he was sick or something when she mentioned she was not that lucky after all. Then he acted so weird and I swing the though that maybe he cheated on her? and kinda though that he would better be sick than doing that. My heart clenched so hard when he snapped and ended it but then ... wow I'm sorry I don't mean it when I though he would better be sick T_T

Regarding the grammar error, yes, I agree to others that you could find the beta reader to help you with it. The story was not bad at all.
jelly_joy #6
Wow such an emotional story. Thank you for writing sweet bitter one shot author-nim.
And I felt sad while reading the letter.
It's great how you were inspired by a song, indeed you are a great writer and a true Baek Stan. Hehe
letscoast #7
Chapter 2: Don't delete it. It's really good. I agree with the other commenter, you just need to find a beta reader to help with the grammar errors. I cried at the end.
Baekie_18 #8
Chapter 2: Nono why do you need to delete. This is too good for me and everyone else I’m sure those who didn’t really comment on this story like me is just shy I hope that you will still keep this story for me and everyone else to read.
Byun_Rara #9
Chapter 2: Ahh whyyyyy. Dont delete this. Its seriously good. You just need to find beta reader so that they can improve your grammatical error.
Byun_Rara #10
Chapter 1: Oh nooooo. I cried while read the letter. He really loves the oc and he knew that byul was his daughter. This is good. Thank you for this one shot T_T
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