Chapter 3: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1462589/3'>Remains Of Forgotten Memo...</a></span>
Chap 2: Gurl. YOUR. WORDING. SKILLS. ARE. BEYOND. AMAZING! Seriously, how are you so underrated??? Like HOW?!

You know what you are great at? Describing the scenery to the smallest detail and making it for your readers a great imagination! Well done! Hats off to that, bruh. I'm mindblown.

The ending again! Soooo good! It makes me wonder if Sera turns into a porcelain doll being too?? I will never know, but you are leaving it to our imagination and that's simply great!

I've not come across many authors with this way of writing and I gotta admit, you might be my favorite in depicting scenery!

Well done! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Chapter 1: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1462589/1'>The Bloody Portrait</a></span>
Chap 1: I wanna start off with praising you. Seriously, what beautiful way of writing you have! The chosen words are perfect for describing the atmospheres from the autumn walk to the bedroom! Well done! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Your skills are top!

But: I was surprised to see the first German line in this, it somewhat has a weird meaning or a wrong way of wording... Is it a German quote or translated from English to German? The second German line makes more sense in the wording 👌🏼

There are only few typos, any of major impact tho. So we don't care about typos here ;)

YOU sent shivers down my spine with that man moving closer in the portrait and then vanishing, like brrrrr (>_<) I love art and I've studied art and the meaning behind portraits and all, so imagining this part was amazing!

Well done with the brief dialogue at the end, not revealing too much, yet letting us know who or what he is! Great ending too! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Seriously, with that skill of wording and writing you should go on!!

Just a question: do I need to start from the first chapter and proceed to the other chapters or are they stand alones?

I have had an early October this year due to current events and I will dive right in on this one. I don’t see much NCT/WayV writers on here, so I’m glad to have this posted on my wall. The boys look incredibly creepy and the layout is fitting.

Also, i think I also thought it the first time I saw the title of the story, but did you ever listen to Saint-Saëns' Danse Macabre and the tonal poetry?

Chapter 1: Not gonna lie, when I started reading I was unfortunately reminded of Damien Hirst and I don't like that gut as an artist :D and the German sentence sounded bit clunky to me, even if I read old stuff 🙈 but I didn't finish at all, I just wanted to see if it would be interesting to read, but I need coffee first and so some corrections :D

Chapter 8: I don’t even know where I should start this was so good. First this a masterpiece, I’ve never read a Halloween story that felt like a horror movie. I was tempted to look behind me while reading Yangyang’s story. I especially loved all the names you used, and I’m sure I have Akai written down on my name list. Overall this was amazing, and so creative defiantly one of my favorite Halloween stories.

Chapter 8: Damn that's hotttt! I finally finished the series, and honestly I'm quite sad, since it's rare to find good stories like that! Thank you for the stories <3

Chapter 7: Hey Ireally like this theme and idea of him being a serial killer, but like just serial killer, the one who's like Robin Hood but more sinister. Ten fits it nicely and honestly I want a continuation of that, keep it up <3