Critical Eleven

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Inspired by Critical Eleven by Ika Natassa. Tells the story of love and marriage between Kim Jong Kook and Song Ji Hyo. These two people who love each other have to face the biggest tragedy of their marriage when Kim Ae Jung, their baby in Ji Hyo's womb, passes away. Grief over Ae Jung's departure creates distance between them, and ultimately, threatens Jong Kook and Ji Hyo's happiness as a family.

Foreword

Critical Eleven: The most critical 11 minutes in the Aviation World which is 3 minutes after take off and 8 minutes before landing.

Because I really love the book and the film, I decided to translate this into Spartace fanfic. This plot and story don't belong to me at all, I just change a few things to match with Spartace story. This also how I interpret the book into my own writing and to shorten the book.

It's going to be a two-parter story with first chapter in Ji Hyo's point of view and second chapter in Jong Kook's point of view.

Hope you enjoy! Cheers!

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liulishi #1
Chapter 2: your second page (found) is broken 😭😭😭
Moon_22 #2
Chapter 2: where can I find a Jong Kook oppa? <3
spartaceid #3
ur stories are so gooddd why are they so good? hahah thank u for ur hard work
aibarbz #4
Chapter 2: Wow, this story made me cry 💞💞💞💞. Kudos to the writer for writing this beautiful story.
multi_fanaccnt #5
Chapter 2: I loved it!!! This made me cry! I'm so happy that it ended well :) Thank you for sharing this story into a spartace AU <3
spartacesparkle #6
Chapter 2: I'm crying. This is so good!!! I really love the way you translate stories to Spartace. Thanks so much <3
sa_1109 #7
Chapter 2: It's really heartbreaking, can't imagine how she felt when she need to go through pain labour to her baby just like other mother do, but she can't hear her baby's cry :( and to making it worst, she have to heard those sentence from someone she needed the most .... Ahhhhh i'm a crying mess here ..
Thank you foe your hard work ^^
ChoKwanGi #8
Chapter 2: Thank you for another beautiful story.
madisonisodd #9
Chapter 2: Ah thank you so much for this story, unnie! The philosophy behind the critical eleven makes it all perfect. I was crying and anxious at the scene of Jongkook waiting for her. Thankfully it is a happy ending :)
rishou #10
Chapter 2: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/1459953/2'>Found</a></span>
Ooooo, that scene with Jongkook desperately running to Jihyo after 3 hours of waiting for her is so heartbreaking. I loved it!

I was constantly at the edge of my seat waiting if Jihyo will leave him or not, even at the last scene!
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