The Moment My Heart Flinched

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From their first meeting and beyond, Yesung always made Kyuhyun’s heart flinch and he wouldn’t have it any other way. 

Foreword

 

 

Hello! oncelfcaratstay here! This was supposed to be posted on Yesung’s birthday but certain things happened and so I was late ehehe. Honestly though, writing this story made me realize that fluff is not my genre, my angst is only slightly better but still dismal, I have zero idea about comedy and that my writing skill has really dwindled over the years AHAHAHHA Anyways, I hope you still enjoy this story somehow! Also, if you want you can find me on twitter as @oncelfcaratstay, please don’t be shy to talk to me!

 

Belated Happy Birthday Yesung! Also, please stream Kyuhyun’s The Moment When My Heart Flinched! I recommend that you use it as background music while reading this fic to increase the feels!

Author's Thoughts
oncelfcaratstay
Thank you so much for reading! I hope you enjoyed reading this! Please don’t be shy to talk to me on twitter, I’m @oncelfcaratstay! Hm… Should I give Yesung’s point of view using Your Eyes? Or a sequel? Just Kidding! Please comment if you can!
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dzigh27 #1
Chapter 1: One of my fave Kyusung fic.
I love how you included the true events to make a beautiful heart-fluttering love story.
And the confession.. so sweet!
And how the lyric really conveyed their feelings... *faint*
wayforrokkugo #2
Chapter 1: loved reading this again while listening to the song this time 💙💙
Liza_Blessedx2 #3
Chapter 1: Kyuhyun's confession.... love love love it <3<3<3
KameSamaYesung #4
Chapter 1: this was super cute <3
rhenny #5
Chapter 1: Wow! That's amazing. I really love how you wrote the story. Kyuhyun and Yesung's characterizations are so great that it makes me feel this is real haha! I must admit that I'm as smitten as Kyuhyun over Yesung in this story xD The scenes you painted in the story made me swoon! That was really wonderful and I'm looking forward to reading more KyuSung stories from you! It has been a long time since I last commented in a KyuSung fic so sorry if this is just full of ramblings xD Thank you for sharing that story! Kudos! Yay for KyuSung <3
jongwoonlicious #6
Chapter 1: Oh * ^ * This was so perfect! I loved it! Now I need a sequel xD Please! *puppy eyes*
ninive #7
Chapter 1: After the concert I so wanted someone to write a fanfic about how much Kyuhyun liked Yesung wearing a choker. This was perfect, I really liked the rest too and how you included some of their bubble content.

I actually think it was Eunhyuk who copied Kyuhyun in teasing Yesung, he used to be a nice dongsaeng up until Kyuhyun left for the army. The difference is that Eunhyuk is obvious, and doesn't mind if Yesung wants to hit him, while Kyuhyun doesn't want Yesung to get angry at him or feeling insecure for something he said.

Yesung has been calling him Kkuru at least since 2014, you can search it on his twitter, it used to be Gaemgyu baby before that.
zielarchie #8
Chapter 1: Such adorable yekyu x"D
farrelandmerry 351 streak #9
Chapter 1: It's so amazing~ Lovely story~ I love it to the moon and back <3333

Yesung POV? YES puhleaseeeee

? OFF COURSE YOU NEED TO WRITE ABOUT IT! You know we all here are ert #got slapped by others

PS : can't talk to you on twitter, I don't have twitter (or any other social media) at least you are my friend here, right?
mooncloud #10
Chapter 1: I like how you wrote kyu’s thoughts and also suju’s appearances. Please do write yesung’s pov AND ? no matter how long it takes. Hahahaha! Thank you as always for your hardwork.

Also, playing “The Moment My heart flinched” while reading was really a good suggestion. It made the “confession” part more emotional lol ?✨
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