Do-Over

Description

Officer Jung arrives at a crime scene during a very rainy day to find a boy dead in the middle of the road. A mysterious ring decorates one of the boy's fingers, seeming to channel the electricity in the stormy air. When he moves closer to investigate, all hell breaks loose and Daehyun awakes from a dream.

But at work that day, the boy in his dream arrives at the police station for questioning, very not dead. And the ring has made it's way into Daehyun's pocket somehow. What is he supposed to think about this?

Foreword

Heyyyyyyyy wow it's been a while since I've been on asianfanfics. I decided to search daejae because even though B.A.P isn't around, my love for them (and the ships) remains forever, and I found a writing contest! So I decided to try my luck at it and see if this helps me get back into fanfic writing :) 

Here's the writing contest: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1427614/2020-variety-writing-contest-open-and-accepting-entries

shiranui1295
"Station 0126", ey? Ey? Get it? haha :3

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Madbabybap #1
Chapter 4: Wow this is incredible! I love so much the concept of B.A.P as officers/detectives! I'm really curious to know what is going on with Youngjae and his strange behaviour, as well as what is the whole dream thing about. Also, your writing style is amazing!
onlywriter_7
#2
Just found this story and it is really interesting!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! >o<
luchiis #3
Chapter 4: I love this story... hope you update soon, I wanna know what is going on
sirchenchen
#4
Chapter 4: Oooh definitely an eventful chapter! I can only imagine himchan’s shock when daehyun contacts him and is like “oh yeah also youngjae works at a bar” he really does have a weird sort of luck with this stuff!

When it comes to adding pictures to fics, it’s easiest if you use aff’s photo album for it. If you upload the picture(s) you want to show (and you can choose whether you want the photos to be public or private in your album, doesn’t matter which one) it’ll give you a link that you can copy to the clipboard and paste into the area for image url that pops up when you click the ‘image’ button on the aff story editor toolbar. If that’s what you’re doing and it’s still not working, then uhhh I don’t know what the problem is ^^;
sirchenchen
#5
Chapter 3: For a second I was worried that Kim WASN'T going to be on board, but now we've got our merry dream trio ready for action!
frenetic #6
Chapter 2: Very interesting start! Now...to confirm if Kim (Himchan??) and Youngjae also had the same dream! Gee, thinking about it is giving me goosebumps!!
sirchenchen
#7
Chapter 2: Chapter naming is always a hassle, it’s why I prefer to default to song titles ^^;

ANYWAYS the premise for this story is really interesting and like, it’s got that part of my brain that likes to theorize going wild. Like, is all this the work of some dream manipulating creature that’s decided “hey let’s mess with those guys” or maybe the electricity ring has dream hopping properties and latches onto someone if they take it in the dream? And there’s the possibility that youngjae also had this dream because even if he was dead in it, then he still played a part in it right??