one step at a time.

Description

Chanyeol doesn't usually sit by the bar.
He never orders hard liquor either. Today he does.

Yifan doesn't usually ask questions. Today he does.

Foreword

"Hi."

Yifan put up a small, professional smile.

"Good evening. Wheat beer?"

To his surprise, Chanyeol shook his head, making him feel a little embarrassed about the assumption.

"A shot of vodka, please? And keep them coming?"

 

 

 

 

this is a selfprompt for the novemberrain fest.

thanks to my prompter Xiuchen4ever and my test reader sophluorescent ♡

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imdatdesttroyer #1
Chapter 1: this was so cute and slow that I love it 😭😭 srsly I don't have the right words or maybe the others who commented before me had already said it, tho I still appreciate this work of art u wrote, authornim! 🥰
wannaseesomewords #2
Chapter 1: This was such a beautiful piece :"))))) I enjoyed every word of it truly
Naru4ever #3
Chapter 1: Hey,

first of all I just want to thank you for posting and writing this story.
I have not been active on AFF for quite some time (even some years) but I am wine drunk and wanted to relive some of my darkest and happiest moments I had: surviving off on beautiful fanfictions on this website.

I am beyond happy that you chose to write about Chanyeol and Kris. I have been shipping them since the beginning and the unfortunate turn of events has always been hard on me.

Regarding this one shot (I admit I usually never read one shots, as I love slow burns and extensive Universes) I am just amazed by the detail and the atmospheric building. Maybe it's because I am tipsy, but I could see the bar, I could hear Yifan and Chanyeol and imagine the conversation. It was absolutely heart warming and a beautiful slice of life one shot that really moved me.

The characterization of Chanyeol and Yifan just really matched my personal imagination. The oversharing and kinda awkward Chanyeol spilling his guts out, as Yifan who is usually more detached can't help but fall for his charm. Absolutely breathtaking!

I can't thank you enough for these amazing 15 minutes I had with your fan fiction!
Lariat95 #4
Chapter 1: Hi!

I am back from the dead (back from wattpad, really) to catch up on the fic's you wrote while I was away from the site, and let me tell you I chose a good start with this one.

I like that you wrote them ending up together in a sentence, like a passing thought, because we all knew it was going to end there so the build up was more important and I really like how you built the foundation of their friend ship in one night.

I think writers (me included) sometimes forget how powerful dialogue can be. It doesn't always need to be a big event or some convoluted plot forcing the characters together, just one long talk can do magic to connect people and this was a great example of that.

Love you ~ <3
NoorKyra #5
Chapter 1: Hmmmm...are they're together now..??? Is been so long I've read KrisYeol fic...

Now I found one.... I like the slowburn like this... No need to rush things and whatnot... Love it..

(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Nikita_trivedi #6
Chapter 1: Awesome. I've read krisyeol fic after so long! Glad that someone still ships them, just like me. Pls make more of krisyeol if u can...
Aroushee1 #7
Chapter 1: Aww.. this was so cute and quite of an open-ending. Really enjoyed it. I really love all your stories which im subscribed to most of them but i always get intimidated by all the comments and dont know what to type as it might pale in comparison.
But i just want to say that i always enjoy your stories and hopefully you always get inspired to create more amazing stories??
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