Isn't it a prettier way to express my feelings ?

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Yongsun a florist leading a monotone life finds a ray of sunshine in the person of Hyejin, a student who enters her shop on an April evening. The student which always appears bearing new injuries on her body finds new comfort in the unexpected kindness. Slowly, a new opportunity for happiness rose from the flowers watching over them.

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remm_remm
#1
This is beautiful! Thank you
Radish94 #2
Chapter 1: One word, beautiful :'
windflowers-
#3
Chapter 1: from all your fics i've tried, i think this read the most smoothly.
i'm, as you know, a hyejin x flowers enthusiast, so i was like !!! flowers !!! hyejin !!! i need to update subtle power !!! hwasun !!!

also, i could feel a melancholic feeling, an ambient around wheein and yong... sad, but sweet.

your writing is the sort that makes scenes that weren't written, show more? like somehow, it leaves an impact when you write that hyejin already knew of wheein's feelings towards yongsun, when the reader could probably have no idea of that. i think there's always a sense of mystery in your writing, from stuff you have published to stuff that you never did (that one longass hwasun story).

just mystery in general, the character and their feelings.

now, pizza, be happy. be happy, pizza!!
zxc1234 #4
Chapter 1: woah, this is really good!!
velahohoho #5
Chapter 1: I wonder where hyej gets the injuries from
anothermuggle #6
Chapter 1: <3
Byulster #7
Ooohh. It's what I expect it to be?!!!!