You Shouldn't Have Come

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here's a little gothic oneshot just for you! please enjoy! ^^

Foreword

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I was drenched from head to toe,

my teeth chattering as a result of the cold air mixed with my wet body.

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The chair slowly rocked forward.

   And back.

   Forward…

   And back.

~~~

Then I heard his sickly sweet voice whisper into my ear.

   You should not be here.

 ~~~

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Helga99
#1
Well holy , this was really good. You set the mood so creepy, I like it. :)
Bigfiniteaholic4lyf
#2
Chapter 1: Wow ~ !! This was really good. It made me a bit scared since I was home alone while reading this /)_(\
shineegirlxx #3
ohhhh so scary :O
noodlefreak
#4
very nice story. creepy, I got creep out from reading it. Awesome job. XD
jess-for-you
#5
@hyukxin: Ahaha yeah that was what I was trying to achieve.. so yay mission accomplished! :) and thanks!
hyukxin
#6
I got chills reading this omfg I love how you got the mood just perfect ;_; well done!