Heartbeats

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Moon Luna hates everything—wailing children as patients, nonsensical gossip in the hospital from equally nonsensical people, dirt in her carpet, expensive house bills, people, men, you name it. There’s actually nothing that she likes; she finds everything annoying. Albeit a worth-respecting pediatrician at an early age, Doc Moon is often dubbed as Luna-tic by people in the hospital for pretty much her known reputation—being an arrogant and prideful person.

But no one could have warned her for an impending surprise that would turn her life upside down—because who would have known that in her abandoned attic, actually lies behind another laboratory, hiding her crazy uncle’s ‘most precious' creation? For the first time in her life, Luna found herself at a loss of what to do when she found six not-exactly human boys cyborgs placed in pillars with chargers attached to them who, upon being awaken activated, introduce themselves with strange code names and serial numbers. One thing is for sure, she now knows the reason why her electricity bill is so expensive.

Foreword

No plagiarism. Plagiarism is a crime. I do not own any characters (EXO and other KPOP idols) in this story and any identical plotlines, events, ideas, and characters with other stories are all purely accidental.

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ColdOne
I know, I know. I'm the slowest at updating, BUT I'm in the process of editing the posted chapters and I'll be posting the newest right after. Read all the edited ones; I promise they are much better!

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miyoonji #1
Chapter 3: I don't remember that doc Nam is so annoying in the old version. But sometimes people are annoying like that. Luna is getting along with Hermione. Wasn't it twelve cyborgs in the old version?
Sharo001
707 streak #2
Chapter 3: I think I like Luna a little better this time around. Even though she’s still on the cold side, we see her as more of a victim of circumstance. Doc mood is somewhat irritating (haha) but I love his resilience. Hermione is my favorite character so far, I think the little Queen runs the household. I see that’s it’s only 6 cyborgs so far, can’t wait to see how the others suddenly appear. Great job.
Handoongi
#3
Oh wow i almost late for this new version of Heartbeats! Time to following up soon~
Sharo001
707 streak #4
Chapter 2: Can’t wait to see the changes you’ve made to the chapters.
Handoongi
#5
Chapter 6: Only a few scenes of KJM here but he already make a full form of Luna's day here haha
Sharo001
707 streak #6
Chapter 6: The events in this chapter show that it’s never too late to learn important lessons in life. Luna can be very unreasonable at times, so she should feel some guilt at her actions to others. It will be kind of ironic that robots will actually teach her about basic human emotions. Unknowingly, KJM is already having a positive effect on the good doctor. Nice update, I really enjoyed this chapter.
moonchild__cupcake__ #7
Chapter 4: Hope you will update soon. And since this an ot12 ff so will exo m appear later on?
love this story:)
Sharo001
707 streak #8
Chapter 5: Finished reading all the chapters so far, and the story is getting better and better. Luna’s reaction to KJM is so funny, as is his to her. I hope we see the cyborgs becoming more human over time - as well as warmer to the touch. lol Can’t wait to see how she reacts to them all. Her uncle was a genius, and was apparently looking out for her.
Sharo001
707 streak #9
Chapter 1: I just subscribed and really enjoyed the first chapter. Luna needs some peace and love in her life, and also to loosen up. I can’t wait to see what sort of transformation she makes as the story progresses.
miyoonji #10
Chapter 5: Thanks for updating! What does she mean by 'stay KJM'? Was he allowed to enter her bedroom? Even after the no entering bedroom rule?