To Him, Who Loves Another

Description

 “If she takes up all the space in your heart, how about the people who want to love you? Where do we stand?”

A tear slipped down from her eye, falling to her lips that struggled to keep in her heartbroken sobs but to no avail. Through blurry eyes, she searched for an answer in his eyes. Anything.

One thing she saw: Sympathy.

Anything but that.

She'd never imagined that her heart could feel any greater pain, but there it was, hurting her until it became too unbearable. When she couldn't resist the pain any longer, a whimper tumbled out of and for the first time, she detested drowning into the eyes she loved the most.

Thus, she turned around and left, never to look back again.

 

Foreword

   

Jeon Haneul [21] : The One Who Loves Him

Choi Seungcheol [22] : The One Who Loves Another

 

Details

Main characters: Jeon Haneul (OC), Choi Seungcheol, Jeon Wonwoo, Kang Haewon (OC)

Supporting characters: Other members of SEVENTEEN and more.

Genres: Rom-com, Schoollife, Angst

POVs: Will occasionally change between 1st and 3rd POVs

Inspiration(s): “Barcelona: A Love Untold” (A Filipino Movie, starring Kathryn Bernardo and Daniel Padilla)

Update schedule: TBA

Date started: 02.06.2020

Date ended: TBA

Status: Ongoing

 

Notes

Yeah, I'm probably out of my mind -- I literally just abandoned my Taehyung fanfic from last year and suddenly I reappeared with another new fanfic. I don't know, mahn. Please pray that I'll actually update religiously because I miss writing (like for the fun of it...). Writing used to be my getaway but the fact that it just felt suffocating as of the last few years saddened me so I want to try this again.

Oh yeah, for this story, I would use their real names instead of their stage names.

Your love and support for this new story would be much appreciated!

PS: I read all comments and love them all dearly. I'm just a lazyass. Please don't be sad if I don't reply! I appreciate you, okay?

 

Copyright

All Rights Reserved: Do not use my work or adapt it in any way or form without my permission.

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pandacathy
#1
Chapter 2: It looks like Seungcheol is aware of Haneul crushing on him—I had thought he was not aware this entire time :O I'm relieved that he doesn't lead Haneul on—our lovely female lead chooses to ignore his words and continue her pursuit—and I'm even more relieved that he hasn't gone off at her and told her to stop seeing, talking, interacting with him. I guess one (and probably the main) reason would be the fact that she is his best friend's sister. (If you mess with the friend's sibling, you end up messing with the friend O_O)

It does look like Seungcheol harbors some feelings for Haneul. I'm surprised he sees himself as a twisted person for liking his brother's girlfriend. (I think I see why he thinks that, but dang, he's really hard on himself, if I have to say so myself.) I can't really say much about Seungcheol since this is only the second chapter, but I am slowly becoming more curious about him, the relationship between him and his brother, and the relationship between him and his brother's GF.

Thank you for updating this story! I hope you're doing well! Take care :D
chonanay
#2
Chapter 2: Then please stop treating her like she's special to you, Seungcheol-ssi. That will hur her even moooore :'(
pandacathy
#3
Chapter 1: Author: *Makes Haneul in love with her brother's best friend*
Me: "I can totally see that. It's not uncommon for a girl to fall for her brother's best friend. But dang... The sibling zone is worse than the friend zone. Let's hope this love triangle won't become messier than it already is."
Author: *Makes Seungcheol in love with his brother's girlfriend*
Me: "I spoke too soon."

What an interesting first chapter! I expected Haneul's character to be shy, like the typical wallflower girl one would find in a one-sided love story, but you proved me wrong when she went off at her date for seeing her behind his girlfriend's back. It's refreshing to have a female protagonist who doesn't always stand on the sidelines. Of course, given she's in love with her brother's best friend, I understand why she doesn't make her feelings known and instead uses jokes and very, very subtle flirting when interacting with him. The interaction between her and Seungcheol is one I can totally picture and the reason is probably because of story I drafted a long ago about a girl who falls in love with her friend's brother. It's now buried by a bunch of other unfinished stories XD

Thanks for writing this chapter! This story is off to an interesting start. Since you didn't dwell much on Haewon, I'm now curious about why Seungcheol likes her (I'm assuming he likes her because of his reaction to his brother's profile picture). I wish all the best for the next chapter! I hope you're doing well and taking care of yourself! :D
itstosun
#4
omg omg omg the scream i just made when i saw this omg i just missed aff for a sec and then BAAM! queen yang back at it again to hit me where it hurts most :(((


“... how about all the people who want to love you? Where do /we/ stand?” AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH

ALSO????? You’ve watched Barcelona??? I’ve been meaning to but nothing is pushing me to watch it.
pandacathy
#5
I’m in a mood for some angst and one-sided love (those are what I got from your description). I totally get your note for writing. I miss doing it, but I have no time or motivation for it. Work and the stuff happening in my private life are my main priorities right now :'(

Welcome back, jpgmingyu! I hope you’re doing well! I wish all the best for you and this story! :)