Chapter 12: i'm deceased, really

Chapter 19: i was so excited to see that this was updated and i honestly had so much fun reading the prologue !! you write so well that it's really easy to envision and feel everything that is going on within the group - i kid you not, i made the "e u e" face when hyuk arrived at the restaurant bc i knew tension was going to arise and i'm here for all that drama lmao
honestly, a bit shocked that the maknae is fOURTEEN : O A WHOLE BABY FJDSKLFSA the poor boy stuck in this group with these petty and troubled hyungs but i love how he steps up despite his age.
+ whenever i saw yejun's name, i shed a proud tear like "that's my baby he made it he's in this story"
the visuals were amazing and i actually loved that you put them in, including the messenger layout! it personally helped me while reading bc i have trouble reading just a bunch of text without some sort of breaks here and there so i thought it was a really cool thing to do!
overall, this chapter was such a fun read and if they were already having this much trouble six months into their debut, i can't wait to see how everything has changed, for better or for worse, when we fast forward to the present.

Chapter 19: hello omg i was so happy to see that the story updated! i hope you've been doing well and taking care of yourself! it was nice to see hyukjin really being a leader and showing loon some form of comfort during such a nerve-wrecking time in the first part of the prologue before he just... disappeared. it kinda made me feel bad for juwon who had to buy the members a free meal in order to try and win their hearts (but wenxing would definitely accept the free meal). but the way thorn outed the members out for it going out with the newest member to hyukjin even though the latter just ditched them... it's really nice to see that the final lineup you chose had characters with different personalities (i haven't been very good with reading other people's apps so... but kudos to you for reading so many of them!!). from the way yejun cried to loon's excitement and taejun's worries when they got their first win, these group of boys really seem so different but at the same time, they're mostly fighting for the same dream. i also really loved how you portrayed the tension between hyukjin and juwon but the whole thing reminded me of that meme with the 'welcome home cheater' sign. poor taejun who had to try and ease up the tension even though he's literally the youngest and has to calm down the members who are much older than he is. the entire group dynamic already seems to be so on edge but they're only a six month old group in this prologue and i'm definitely really interested in seeing how they would act around each other as the years play out and as their secrets start getting exposed. i also really love it when groups have a chinese line so i'm glad that loon and wenxing seem to be close with each other (for now)!

anyways, thank you so much for this prologue!!

Chapter 19: :0 The prologue! This was such a fun read, it was super interesting to see the unsteadiness of the group from early on. It's good to see the manager being a solid presence for the group, despite the leader drama.
Honestly that had to be the most fun part, seeing the others and their first impressions of Juwon as a member. The company really put him in a tough spot but I mean, Hyukjin sorta put everyone else in a tough spot so. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Super super interested to see how his character is gonna develop and how much he'll come to terms with Juwon's presence by present-day in the story.
You can also already see who the more reserved members are as compared to the forward ones. Getting to know their individual situations and how they work inside the group struggles is gonna be fun! I think this was honestly an awesome first look at everything, and the edits were fun!! I think it helped pace things well and gave a good indication of when we were changing scenes. Thank you for putting in so much effort!! This was a really good birthday present incidentally. ^_^

Chapter 19: ehm, hello, hope you don't mind a bystander coming through ;u;
this was quite the read c: i feel elated for their first taste of success but at the same time, their first win seemed so bitter-sweet (mainly) because of the secrets they have, they couldn't really enjoy the long awaited success :" i've only read a few of their apps (and probably won't read the others because gonna enjoy this as a reader and be surprised by their secrets ;) ) but them boys do deserve it since they've worked hard ;A;
the effect of hyukjin's absence, whew. and the company bringing tension with a new unofficial leader instead of pointing out someone from the group to temporarily fill in? double whew. maybe that was their intention, bring someone new to threaten hyukjin's position? like wow, look at him showing up after thorn informed him owo gotta give it to juwon though (the way to someone's heart is through their stomach--or through freebies lmao) for handling the situation and undeterred by hyukjin. ...i hope the boys didn't get indigestion from all the tension haha also, the maKNAE'S FOURTEEN--HE"S A BABY. A BABY.

Chapter 19: https://imgix.elitedaily.com/uploads/image/2019/3/13/b80509f7-638f-42c6-a576-0dea83f2972b-giphy.gif

Chapter 19: OH BOY THIS CHAPTER IS SOMETHIN TO UNPACK HUH (and this is just a prologue??? not even a chapter?? excuse me what??? i'm in love thank you)
first off, their win u w u i'm so proud of the lil boyos <3333
but oh dear hyukjin b o i what are you d o i n g. no no, you can't get upset for being 'replaced' when YOU ran off on your group -- i'm sorry but i won't be on your side today :) maybe another day. also thorn being "oh must fit in" is... yes. fit in, escape notice, slither to safety when you can.
THIS IS A RIDE. I'M NOT GONNA LIVE.
normally i comment longer but
my brain
my brain exploded like what -- moral of the story is h y u k j i n be a better leader

Chapter 12: The fans in the comments, particularly in regards to Yongrae are SENDING me...It's so realistic you have to laugh, assuming they know the behind-the-scenes and what their idols want it's just so funny to me.

Chapter 12: so taejun went on a whole hiatus for cursing in a song 💀 gotta love netizens am I right

Chapter 12: not the hyukjin stan’s comment being downvoted into oblivion-