Garden of Eden

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The Garden of Eden, a place where there's eternal magic and where sorrow is no more. It's a pseudo-myth that a scientist strives to intepret by understanding the Ancient Race. 

A cold-hearted mercenary questions his contractors when he's told to capture a girl who's a descendant of the Ancient Race. However, once he gets tangled with her, he begins to question his own past, and the cost of freedom.

Foreword

A/N: As I will now be playing the Final Fantasy 7 Remake, this story will be heavily inspired by the final fantasy series! Buckle up guys! I promise you this will be a fantasy story that'll blow your minds :P I'm really focusing on character development when plotting this!

This is an entry for Tigress' Girl Power contest and also Rolling the Dice contest

I'm using Image prompt 7 as the inspiration: 

Prompt for Rolling the Dice:  the person who grows up as the Chosen One learns they're destined to destroy the world, not save it

Character Files: 

Jungkook: "Who am I? Where did I come from?" 

Dahyun: "The Garden isn't only for the Ancients. They merely guide you there." 

Taehyung: "Eh, I'm just your friendly neighbourhood vegetable."

Taeyong: "The world is dying, and I'll do anything to stop that."

Tzuyu: "Maybe I can be someone greater, someone who represents the people."

Mark: "I'm not my father. I'm just Mark."

Nayeon: "You weren't supposed to find me."

Jimin: "I wouldn't trust me either."

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The trees breathe with life,

The leaves are the souls,

Here lies the Garden with no sorrow or strife,

Here shall you drink honey from the Garden’s bowels.

But enter it alone you cannot,

And trying shall bring you blight,

We ask for one soul sought

Open the Gates will the Child of Light.

~The Gates, by Anonymous

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-Tigress- #1
So I hope you're in a better way now ♡ I was wondering if you might find the inspiration to finish this for the Girl Powrr contest! If you need help I am only a message away!
-Tigress- #2
Do you need an extension for this? The contest ends in 2 days and I very much want to read this! Also, remember that all completed stories get a karma prize!
anitaklr24 #3
Chapter 11: Every chapter is getting more interesting.
Jungkook is trying to find his memories, but is he going to get hurt for doing that?
Is he going to see his father in that reunion?

I am looking forward to next chapter!
Take care!
Hugs ^^,
anitaklr24 #4
Chapter 8: Wow Tzuyu knows Jungkook, but she thinks that he is died. Why?
In the chapter 7, Daehyun's father wants Santa Maria and the Thunderstorm away from them. Is it because of Daehyun's powers?
I don't know what organization is telling the true Santa Maria or the Thunderstorm? I don't have a lot of information jajaja.
Tzuyu is part of the thunderstorm now, isn't she?
This is so interesting!
I am going to read the rest!
Take care!
Hugs ^^,
anitaklr24 #5
Chapter 6: Jungkook is like a child. He is discovering a lot of things again because of his amnesia.
It was cute how he tried to get close to the animals and couldn't. jajaja
He and Daehyun are interesting.
Could it be that Ancients tried to communicate with Junkgkook in his dreams ?
anitaklr24 #6
Chapter 4: Wow Daehyun healed Jungkook. Does her power use her energy?
Poor Taehyung. He is being friendzoned.

I will read the next chapter!
It is a great story!
Take care
Hugs ^^,
EtherealMuffin #7
Chapter 6: I think I have a newly grown fondness for JK's character after this chapter. There's something almost childlike about him through Dahyun's observations. He's so easily overwhelmed by the simplicities of life, like shopping through a market and handling animals, it's like he's grown up as a machine to follow orders and missed out on these little experiences that people take for granted. He may portray himself as cold and uncaring, but he does things out of the blue at times, that throws both Dahyun and the reader off for a second; like agreeing to beat up the hoodlums and then also agreeing to help out with saving the cat in the sewers. I think there's a lot more to discover about JK, and all the inner turmoils that possess him.
I can see that Dahyun is growing more and more interested in learning more about him too. I wonder if this curiosity will turn into something more intimate at some stage?

Taehyung's remarks are some of the best in this chapter! "Walnut brained cabbage!" He's very goofy and fun, but I think his presence is overpowered by JK. I'm interested to see if he'll play an important role in this story
snowflake16 #8
Chapter 5: I really like the ambience in this chapter. It's light and fluffy, easy to digest and a pleasure to read. Ah, I loved it. JK and Dahyun have very solid characters. Can't believe he went ahead with her plan even tho it kinda killed him inside lol. Its sweet. I wonder why Dahyun got so hurt after his comment on the Garden
snowflake16 #9
Chapter 4: Omg! Blue haired Taehyung distracted me so hard. I thought I wouldnt be able to pay attention to the rest of the chappie but then pappa Namjoon showed up. Are you sure this fic isn't a thriller? My heart is racing 300mph.

Dahyun and the girls are so kind. Kindness is gonna make JK like her. But then what about blue haired Tae? JK should disappear as soon as he gets better. Shouldn't ruin a good thing
anitaklr24 #10
Chapter 2: I am a little confused. Are they like tribes, and do some people have powers?
Where did the cat run, and is it even just a cat?

I will continue reading the story!
Take care!
Hugs ^^,
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