Forbidden Love

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Siyeon didn't expect her last year of school before going to university to be this stressful, but she wouldn't want it any other way. Being the club leader wasn't the hard part, it was having a 1st year girl to catch her attention and then having to hide their relationship from a disapproving world.Β 

Foreword

This story is based off of my experience, but many things were changed to fit better. Hopefully this isn't completely terrible and hope you guys enjoy.

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moonchild48 #1
Chapter 6: Hey Author-nim, welcome back. Thank you for continuing the story.

Siyeon almost set the kitchen on πŸ”₯ while cooking? πŸ˜‚ and Gahyeon teasing her about it made it funnier.
Does Yooh always hug Si like that whenever she sees her?
Yooh inhaling her food is just like my sister rushing hers when she's excited for something or somewhere.
They really had a great time in the fair, even emo Siyeon enjoyed herself too. I can see why they didn't want to leave.
A giant 🐢 winning a giant 🐢. I always wonder why people spend πŸ’° to win in those rigged games while they can buy it at much cheaper price elsewhere. Maybe it's because of the excitement.
This chapter is fun filled. Thank you again.
Have a nice day. See you
SkylerSubs #2
Chapter 5: Yo I just read and this seems like such a good Siyoo story!! I love the setting and it has so much potentional, please continue writing if you feel motivated, I would love to hear how it all pans out in the endd. Out of all the Siyoo fics ive read here honestly this seems like one with the best/most interesting plot and you're writing is really good too! Again take your time, I understand exactly what you mean with lack of motivation.

If you feel unsatisfied with the last chapter I'd say listen to your gut and rewrite it as you feel it should be. Personally I think it was great, it was a good set up for the next day fair activites that would play out, as well I enjoyed the Siyoo interaction, with subtle fluff and kinda embarresed Yoohyeon, it was so cute!!!

So yeah ik Im repeating myself but basically I think your last chapter was great and you really dont have to rewrite but you are the author so do what you think is best. Take your time but i would really really appreciate it if you would consider to continue this since you have it all planned out and the plot is FANTASTIC!!

Take care, thx for making this in the first place <3
Paperbirdd #3
Chapter 5: Please continue ? ? Take the time you need to write it. I'm willing to wait. There isn't much siyoo's fic, I need you ????
godsj00 #4
Chapter 5: It would be amazing if you continued the story, we can always wait :) Also I really enjoyed the chapters so far and the story definitely piqued my interest. Obviously if you don't find joy writing this then you have all the rights to leave it unfinished.
moonchild48 #5
Chapter 5: I would love it if you continue the story, so take your time...
Thanks
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