Restoring Rubbished Love

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Description

Jaebeom- pen name Defsoul- is a musician whose experience with love has forced him to lose faith in it. Youngjae is a vocal trainer whose dream of meeting his favourite RnB musician Defsoul turns into a nightmare when, upon their first meeting, he learns that the musician behind his beloved love songs and long-time crush doesn’t believe in love. Youngjae is disappointed, but he refuses to accept things as they are, so he embarks on restoring Jaebeom’s faith in love.

Foreword

Here is a chaptered 2Jae/Jinson fluffy and romantic story that i wrote back in February for the GOT7 6th anniversary fanfic fest. I'm reposting it in case anyone missed it over there, and this time I decided to split it into 3 chapters since it's quite long for a oneshot. I'll update a chapter everyday, so the story will be done by monday. Enjoy reading. 

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JYin_jbxyj_1706 #1
WELCOME, CAN I TRANSLATE THIS STORY AND REGISTER?
MrFelopoh
#2
[sorry for my late comment, Mondays are just a horrible mess for me ;---;...anyway] OKAY HEAR ME OUT! I'd like to talk about the moments that had me in stitches and swooned by how marvelous this last chapter was. First this line "Hold on, there's something on your face" took me off guard. I melted right away by how innocent, awkward and cute that moment was. YoungJae and JB alone have made my heart fluttered the whole scene (*////*)...Then we got this moment "Hyung let's focus on the point here, the heart emojis" I coudn't find this scene more hilarious. It had me laughing so hard, my sister throw a pillow at me because I was making so much noise. Once again you were able to portray another character's personality quite accurate, making this scene even more precious. Including this part "Mark and Bam Bam burst into another cooing spell" which, again, made me laugh at how real and funny that moment was hahaha...Finally, the ending scene "I'd like you to come to my place and meet my kids" Like I legit believe JB would introduce his pets to anyone first in real life. And what's even better about this part is the way you describe everything! I loved every detail and I am glad both of them shared their hearts out. It was a beatiful ending, full of sweet emotions and funny moments. THANK YOU dear for this tremendous piece of writing. I loved it from beggining to end and I wish you continue writing more stories like this (or any kind actually) This short period we have been talking through comments has been rewarding and I appretiate every moment of it! TAKE GOOD CARE!

[PS: I am secretly seeking for and epilogue. Not that it needs one! I just want to read more about this story line xd Surely I will comeback soon enough to read the whole story all over again <3]
xxnessan
#3
Chapter 1: i've read this before but this is gold 10/10 reading again
reyjaejae
#4
Chapter 2: aggggghhhhh i love this story too ? it is so cheesy~
MrFelopoh
#5
Chapter 2: Hello! it's me again. GOSH Jinyoung and Jackson are such relationship goals! that sometimes is annoying heheh...ONCE AGAIN I must add, the way you have developed the character's personalities has me shooked. Like I, for real, believe they behave that way in real life. If Jackson and Jinyoung were really dating now, I would have a grasp on what they look like on daily basis. I am really impressed actually. I have been writing for some time now (both my mother tongue and English) and I have never accomplished such development in any of the characters I write about, so CONGRATS FOR THAT! The end of today's chapter was so sweet, I swooned at every emotion you described. Hope tomorrow's last part is as exciting and thrilling, and funny, and witty as this one was. Let's stay in touch, shall we? take care :)
MrFelopoh
#6
Chapter 1: I found your story this morning and I am quite happy I did. I love the story so far, I can’t wait for the next update (which I know is coming soon)... I think this is the first time I read a fanfic where Youngjae is so bold and Jaebum is so “shy”, but I supposed they are exactly like this in real life heheheh...anyway, let’s read each other on the next update :)