Next To Her

Description

Lalisa Manoban was quirky and timid. Held it off with a pessimistic and strong attitude for anyone to think twice before encountering. The only threat she posed was to herself, and staying with Jennie Kim was what she wanted to make it go away.

Foreword

WARNING!! (or maybe not really lol) 

this fic is written in a style I haven't tried enough before and not common enough to be called everyone's cup of tea. I am trying it out as an experiment (and also as an excuse for easier writing lol) so I apologize if its format or structure may throw some readers off but I try to find ways to make characters reach out to their audiences more. 

I'll appreciate any kind of feedback. Yes, even negative because I'm so open lol. Suggestions, sure thanks! Even if you don't have feedback to give, thank you for taking your time to read this. It's already enough for me :)

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fayerianaxd #1
Chapter 1: i wish i could have prepared such amazing eulogy for the only person who was there for me when i felt like everyone was leaving me behind. i didnt know that i needed to speak in front of ppl and tell things about her. and even if i was given a heads up, i wouldnt prob write or prepare minutes of speech on how amazing she was, not only to me, to her family but also to everyone else. i just stood there. i was able to speak a lil but couldnt hold it so i broke down. i never cried in her funeral. i never looked at her in the casket cos i felt at that time i wouldnt move on from all of this. but i had to look at her per my mum's request. i had to look at her for my sanity. it's hard. i am lost for months now. i am trying to let go cos it hurts. but the thought of letting her go hurts more. anyway, this is wonderful. thank u for writing this but i couldnt help feeling sad tho. :(
BlackpinkVicc #2
Chapter 1: Okay, well I didnt expect that turn..I really got sad but it's pretty good author-nim!!
kahazi #3
Chapter 1: Sad, jennie died
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