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Working on the final chapter. Might take some time. Ran into some trouble irl and need to fume my anger first

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gaksitalGaksital
#1
Chapter 3: Oh my days, Sehun is so cute and vulnerable that it makes me want to protect him from the evil dark world. With that cuteness aside, I'm going to throw in that he's so in love with Jiseul, and I'm going to guess that she's his first love. How can no one know that they're dating? xD It's just funny that people ship her with his best friend instead, and he's so head over heels for her that it hurts.

Also, I think Chen must have caught onto something. He's definitely looking for drama xD Classic Chen thing to do in stories. What a beast! I think Sehun might eventually get the wrong idea between Jiseul and Kai. She's most likely considering him a friend, but I'm curious to know what she thinks of Sehun? In fact, I wonder now if Sehun's relationship is just made up in his head because there's no clue from Jiseul that they're together. Unless...she's a private person and prefers not to let their personal life get in the way of work?
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#2
Chapter 2: Can I add that I can relate to Suho? He reminds me of myself when I'm demonstrating the undergraduate labs, and trying to get all those science students to finish up their work. He's a good leader.

As for Kai, I find this character very refreshing. He's not some casanova badboy who changes girls like he changes his socks. But this Kai is very human and relatable. He has good days and bad days just like us. Jiseul's character also surprised me, maybe because she's not like your usual OCs haha. She's just very chill and down to earth and comfortable with herself and everyone around her. I like her.

Guess that part hit Kai home. He can probably guess why Sehun wants to marry her now xD
gaksitalGaksital
#3
Chapter 1: Phew, well Kai gives me the impression of a master manipulator. Poor Sehun is so sweet and old-time romantic if he wants to propose despite not knowing Jiseul at full. It seems to me that Sehun's doubt is the main reason he agreed for Kai's plan to come to fruition. It's not really him as a person that agreed to it.
There's a few typos--might wanna reread it quickly. It's not a big deal but since it's so well written the typos just blare out at me.
gaksitalGaksital
#4
I really like the colourful poster. Although something tells me SeKai will make me feel sorry for Jiseul. No one wants to be part of a plot between two best friends.
tonnettie
#5
Chapter 1: Kai made a point but it’s really a huge gumble. I’m excited to know who’s going to have the “I told you so” moment
tonnettie
#6
Test of love and friendship ( for Sehun and Kai)