This is made and created three years ago but as I was forced to think on naming the characters, I couldn't. This story is religion based and please bear in mind I was seventeen when this plot was made and I could say my religious thought it works as such.

but to parallel my understanding now to the plot, I have corrected what seemed wrong and is publishing this only for the purpose of improving my writing skill.

I don't force anyone or any single human being that can understand this, to read this story if you are not comfortable reading anything religious based.

I also bring no harm or wanting to influence people to change your religion.

This is a very straightforward one shot and it don't matter to me if nobody reads it. I published it with the attention of improving my writing skill. 

and I want to explore the genre that I can try writing with the knowledge that I have. 

Thank you for reading till this far and if you wish to proceed on reading, I hope you can leave a comment on your thoughts or opinion that could help me improve in my writing style.

thanks!