Author's Note.

Love at First Bite
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So... 「Love at First Bite」has come to a conclusion. This marks the end of Hayoon's adventure with her friends. Hope you guys are satisfied with the ending!

 

Like I said previously, this is actually the main story I wanted to write back when I first started 「Star, Moon, Thunder and Sun」. I honestly just really wanted to write a Kyungsoo fic and show the boy some love because there just aren't enough Kyungsoo fics floating around. 

 

I initially didn't plan to use all the EXO members, after all the core group of characters aren't that many, but as the story progressed and more people from their everyday life got introduced, I did end up using everyone (some more prominent characters than others). 

 

When first planning the story, I had intended to have Jongin as Thunder, but then I kinda wanted him as the supportive friend who offered Hayoon an escape and boy am I glad that I did so. Sehun was a bit of a surprise for me. He was literally supposed to be just a random name drop in the very first chapter of 「Star, Moon, Thunder and Sun」, someone who dragged Hayoon to the event that introduced her to the rest of the gang. But I suppose that as a side character who kind of instigated it all, it only made sense that he'd sneak into Hayoon's life and become a major component of her close-knit friendship group.

 

As for the wedding in the final chapter, it was a very conscious choice from my part because boy am I happy

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LovaChu
#1
Chapter 16: Oooh the jealousyy
Erponnn108 #2
Chapter 36: amazing amazing just amazing
808aff #3
Chapter 36: Sequel did not disappoint! Love that she needed up with Kyungsoo. Def a shortage of good romantic Soo fics out there
AiiSoo #4
Chapter 35: Never would’ve thought that you’ll make them into a cheesy couple, who don’t mind to show some PDA at that! Hahaha.
Thank you for giving us more Kyungsoo. Nothing can go wrong with more of Kyungsoo. And more of Jongin and Sehun too. With the addition of some more characters. They make an entertaining bunch, really.
At first, I wasn’t sure of who’ll end up with Hayoon. All the male characters here seemed very fond of her. But I’m sure whomever you decided she’ll end up with, are great. I just don’t wanna spoil here for those who hasn’t read this yet.
Thank you for this enjoyable read..!
xiugarmin
#5
Chapter 36: the sequel is more calming and bring me warmth rather than a pain and emotions in the star, moon, thunder and sun. though what happened with jongin bring the same pain and it ended perfectly from my perception!

I think thunder fit chanyeol the most. i really love him in the first story with how sweet he was to hayoon and his act whenever hayoon stressed out but the ending have brought bitter taste for me.. its such a pity that i didnt get chanyeol's proper closure and how the sun, moon, thunder and star had come to the end. pushed out any biased, i agree that chanyeol deserved it :(

it changed to the three musketeers with hayoon. i was hoping to see a glimpse of chanyeol in here but i lovee the friendship dynamic they had! truthfully it's because they feel more genuine toward hayoon :(( and they deserve each other.

satisfied with the ending and love this story too! thanks for writing this! lots love and applause <3
cheonchoni
#6
Chapter 33: This is my comfort story 😌 idk how many times I've read it
cheonchoni
#7
Chapter 34: *internally screaming at how cute hayoon and kyungsoo is*
cheonchoni
#8
Chapter 33: Here i am, smiling alone in the dark in the middle of the night
cheonchoni
#9
Chapter 31: Awww shes not so oblivious after all! Go hayoon!