Exterminate

Description

 

Disappearances are on the rise in South Korea, and police officer Kim Minnie forms a volatile partnership with a masked vigilante who needs help cleaning out the infestation in their district.

 

Foreword

 

A phantom of a question lingers in the back of Minnie’s mind, and the stranger seems to acknowledge it with a snicker.

 

“If you’re wondering, no. I’m not the man behind all this.” They casually spoke like it’s the only explanation she needed. “And if I were one of his collectors, well, trust me… You’d be better off dead instead.”

 

Minnie’s breath hitches as terror flashed in her russet-brown eyes.

 

“But I won’t let that happen to you.”

 

With that point across, they reach into their jacket and pull out a wrinkled handkerchief. The sweet, almost chemical-like smell wafting from it raised every goddamn alarm bell in her head. Chloroform.

 

“This won’t hurt, sweetheart. I promise.”

 

Minnie whimpered. “N-No, wait—”

 

Before she could voice her protest, the cloth is brought to her face and the scent kicks in. She squirms uselessly in a futile attempt to move away, but they grab her head and pressed onto the cloth more.

 

“Easy now…” They murmured softly. “It’ll be over soon. Don’t worry.”

 

The sedation takes effect just a couple minutes later, and Minnie can barely keep her eyes open by the time it’s removed. Her consciousness flickering in and out of the present like a dying lightbulb.

 

“Rest up, dear officer. We’ve got a long day ahead of us tomorrow.”

 

Their voice sounds distant now, and the details of their mask start to blur in her clouded vision.

 

As her body slumped sideways, the last thing Minnie felt was a gloved hand cradling the side of her face gently. Keeping her head away from meeting the cold, hard metal.

 

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Description: Minnie is a low-ranking cop assigned to a major abduction case and becomes acquainted with Yuqi, a capricious girl who is seeking revenge for her family and has secrets of her own.

Notes: Tall, OOC Yuqi ahead, proceed with caution; Not much romance at the start (or at all), so don't get too excited; Other characters to be introduced later; Slow burn with even slower updates.

Focus: Minnie & Yuqi (Main)

Pairings: MinQi (Minnie x Yuqi) | TBA

Genres: Crime / Suspense / Mystery / Action / Romance(?)

Warnings: Blood (may be mild gore), violence, profanity.

 

Rewriting as of 5/11/2021.

**No fixed update schedule. New chapters are posted sporadically, depending on my mood.

 

ApathyandLycanthropy
This has to be the single, weirdest fic I've ever written and posted so far, lmao.

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imagustt #1
Chapter 4: This is great, I need an update please!!! 🙏🏻🙏🏻
leleipuppy #2
Chapter 4: I need an update, this is too good to be left unfinished XD
nstarkeyred200 #3
Chapter 4: Also can’t believe that you corrupted Yejisu 🤣🤣😏😈
nstarkeyred200 #4
Chapter 4: Okay thornim, I get it… your probably going to use the ‘scratches’ (if you call a beating scratches, that is) Yuqi did on Minnie in their fight so as to not make Minnie look sus in the eyes of her partners (and maybe yuqi as the reason why she got out of there [whatever they may think she was being held captive]). Nicely done, if that’s what you are going for 😌🤔. (Hope I’m not wrong, but will still be happy with whatever you go for)
In any case, thanks thornim for the update. Really enjoyed it (and cringed in certain parts, but still loved the graphic depictions [call me sadistic])… keep up the good work and stay healthy Authornim🤗

Nevies, let’s make our leader proud by streaming her comeback and album😌😋
nstarkeyred200 #5
Chapter 3: Oh my god, chaeryeong is such a mood🤣
So, I was wrong about my Miyeon/Soojin helping Yuqi theory (maybe)
I like the change of setting… overall it’s an amazing chapter😌
Though I don’t know how Minnie is going to explain to her teammates her sudden disappearance, sense they probably think she left them
That’s pretty much what I have, not many questions that I’m desperate for answers as of yet… definitely looking forward reading the next chap

Readers, go support our lovely mouse in her debut as an actor in her new drama So not worth it, on Netflix (if you have Netflix, that is)

Thank you Thornim. Keep up the good work✊
nstarkeyred200 #6
Chapter 2: Dude… I can still remember all the dialogue from the old version, gotta say, I’m definitely lovin this version. I like that we’re seeing things but on yuqi’s perspective; it’s also fascinating to know a little bit more on what she has in store for Minnie, it was never fully said (or maybe it was, and I forgot🤷‍♀️)
I wonder how she got ahold of the camera and who helped her (was it soojin or miyeon perhaps)?🤔
We never got those answers in the previous version… I’m really excited to know

Btw, you definitely improved in your writing, it’s a lot more solid and you don’t get lost between all the reading. Keep up the good work Thornim🤗
nstarkeyred200 #7
Chapter 1: I’m glad that you’re back🤗🤗
Haven’t read the re-write, but I’m sure I’m going to love it😊
Hope you continue the story... I was really liking the ooc writing of Yuqi😁 (hope it doesn’t make me look weird😅)

Btw, to anyone who’s reading, support our Yuqi with her debut as a soloist🥳
anchoding
#8
Chapter 5: New reader here, i usually avoid murder story because i'm afraid of the bloods. But this one really enciting. It's hard to imagine Yuqi with that persona but that what makes it more interesting. I can't wait to see how Yuqi and Minnie ( i hope none of Minnie's team mate from earlier chapter involved in that sick human trafficking)

I hope you still working on this story. This so good!!!
Good luck, Authot nim ??????
Izzy_Orbit #9
Chapter 5: Please continue this story! It's so interesting. I have anticipated for an update for weeks!
TheNightSeeker #10
Chapter 5: Can't wait for the next chapters!