The Broken

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Finding a mate meant finding your happily ever after in the lycan world. Wasn't that how it was supposed to be? But as fate would have it, it would be much more complicated for Minzy as she experiences the beginning of the end.

 

 

(I started this story on wattpad with origninal characters. It was called Undone but I only posted like two chapters and scrapped the idea seeing as it was just a struggle bus for me like many ideas as you can see with how many unfinished fics I have haha. So I thought what the hell I'm going to bring the struggle bus here and change the names cuz I can lol. Anyway hope you all enjoy the struggle bus ride!) 

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21bjsygstan
#1
Chapter 55: It was a roller coaster of emotions but I love this story. Thank you for this journey and congratulations.
jiwonku #2
Chapter 8: I just found the story and mash reading on it since yesterday. This is so good. The story, the character. I wish you will continue to update frequently, coz I'm loving this story. Thank you for the nice update btw
CKings27 #3
Chapter 45: Loyalty.

What exactly does she have to do to prove her loyalty to be accepted by Jiyong’s pack. Will Dara be against Minzy joining their pack. Welcome back Mizzm29.

Thank you on updating 😊
CKings27 #4
Chapter 33: Fading….

If his mark is fading does that imply so will their bond. Will another female wolf 🐺 try to get at Alpha Kwon while Minzy is away. If so will he be interested since the pack does need a Luna and Minzy did choose Pack over Love. Will we get to see Minzy’s territorial side when she comes back to see her alpha/mate being seduced by another.

Thank you on updating ☺️
CKings27 #5
Chapter 21: Still Reading.

No worries school family, friends and health come 1st. Wishing you a Great and Safe 1st day of school.

Thank you on updating : )
CKings27 #6
Chapter 12: Jealous Alpha.

Jiyong: Why do I have a feeling the only reason he will allow Taeyang and Minzy to go is if he tags along with them. Will there be trouble once they arrive.

Seungri: Will he be armed and ready to fight for her freedom. In the letter he wrote to her he did say Alpha Daesung’s is trying to figure a way to bring her home. Do they have a plan?

Thank you on updating : )
CKings27 #7
Chapter 11: Building Character.

Jiyong: Could it be that the real reason he doesn’t want Minzy visiting her old pack. Is because she might have a change of heart and request stay.

Taeyang: I wonder if he will meet his mate at Daesung’s pack and if so will he join them or remain where he’s at and continue being Commander.

Dara: Will she continue to give Minzy a hard time or will she befriend her.

Thank you on updating : )
CKings27 #8
Chapter 9: HIS SISTER!!!!!

Dara: What is her problem? She seems to be against Minzy joining their pack.
Could it be she has a thing for the Alpha. Will she be plotting against Minzy.

Seunghyun: Why is he always blocking (LoL) Jiyong when he’s close to Minzy. At 1st I thought he had a thing for her but not anymore then again who knows.

Jiyong: I might be way ahead of myself but did Jiyong or Dara perhaps had a thing before he had a mate or is she the only one crushing on him only.

Taeyang: (I love me some Tae Tae) SIBLINGS, really I thought he was a new love interest. Never would I have thought they were related. Wow having a brother looking like your mate (YIKES) awkward.

Minzy: Honestly now I’m more interested in Minzy and Taeyang on how are they related and ended in different packs. Are their parents even alive. Don’t tell me Dara is their sister too OMG my imagination is running wild thoughts.

Thank you on updating: )
21bjsygstan
#9
Chapter 9: The PLOT TWIST THOUGH
1andonly #10
Chapter 9: Okay. Okay....... Okaaaayy. Can you say PLOT TWIST???!!! I know I should expect this but you have surprised me once again T.T. Like come on I would have not expected that at all!!!