the sky coating your lips

Description

Chanyeol is a tech-savy, hard-working commoner with an utter hate for nobles. That didn’t stop him from enrolling into the Red Sun Academy, which was full of those snooty, privileged jerks.
Living in the same dorm as one of them was taking it a bit far though.

Foreword

God, he hated nobles.

 




Uhmmm... hi!
I'm still alive. I guess.
I've been struggling to write recently, and I kinda vanished for a bit... but here I am!
This is me trying to overcome writer's block by writing something relaxing and simple and short. Sorry if this is rusty and awkward, I'll get back into it.

I'll add to this whenever I'm free, but I actually got plenty of ideas, which is kinda exciting~

This story is set int he universe of Trails of Cold Steel - which is a wonderful game - buuut as per usual with my obscure au's, there's no need to know the source material.
(The first chapter might look otherwise, but I swear it's gonna be a simple, chill read)

If you DO know the source material though... I only played the first 2 games, please don't spoil me *haha*

    Much love,
    Sugary

 

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Missanion
#1
Chapter 11: He is,indeed the most powerful noble in the country .
Awww Chanyeol didn't want to get up so he could still kind of "cudle" with Jongdae! I have the feeling Dae just did the same. He always gets up earlier than Yeol so...maybe he got closer to Yeol on purpose? ?
Missanion
#2
Chapter 10: Oww this was cute. Yifan feeling truly comfortable in his city. I wonder if something that was said by Yifan's mothers made Jongdae sad or frustrated.
Missanion
#3
Chapter 9: What's Jongin role in their family? Yixing is the mom, Luhan the excentric uncle, Yifan the older broter, Chanyeol the little brother, Kyungsoo the dad and Jongdae the cat haha. Is he the middle child? ?
I like a lot the way Chanyeol is always hiper aware of Jongdae. He notices Jongdae's change of behaviour in an instant. He was the only one who noticed that Dae was slowing his steps.
Missanion
#4
Chapter 8: I think Minseok took interest in Luhan? ?

Hahaha I laughed with "generously made time for a pitying glare thrown his way "hahahah that was too much Hahaha. You can't help but imagine Jongdae purposely making time in his cramped agenda to send a glare to Chanyeol in all his noble glory hahahhaah.

Chanyeol taking care of Jongdae was cuuute! He was worried but was trying to denied it and the conversation they had was deep. Jongdae revealed a lot of things about his family and what they expect from him being the successor of the Kim family. It is sad. He is not happy and it is showing little by little.
Missanion
#5
Chapter 7: Zitao was really funny with his fear for bugs untill he got so arrogant and mean towards Luhan and childishly pushed him into the pond. That kind of behaviour was unacceptable.
Chanyeol did great, if only he didn't take his anger out with the poor Jongdae haha.
P/d:I also think is amazing how Jongdae can be so rude while speaking such elegant and flawless words haha.
Missanion
#6
Chapter 6: Hahahaha this chapter was so funny. Chanyeol and Jongdae really feel comfortable around each other, they don't care about titles when they are arguing haha.
I find cute the way Jongdae was correcting Chanyeol's notes. He didn't have to do it but he still did it to help Chani! Wasn't he cute? Haha.
Missanion
#7
Chapter 5: Jongdae's saccharine voice! I love it. He really was there for them. He taught Chanyeol all he could within the 3 days. He was patient, mature and polite.
So liquid amber eh? Haha Chanyeol really likes to watch Jongdae being bathed under the sunlight rays 😏. It is cute but is like he can't take his eyes out of him. He likes to appreciate Jongdae's beauty and deny it at the same time. I think he searched for Jongdae when he won the match looking for approval.
I am so enchanted with Jongdae. He is so polite, so intelligent, so calm and so fair. He never uses his range to overpowered the others. He never tried to impose his decisions and never humilliated someone. It is clear he deslikes those things but he used his power and noble title to protect his friends .He literally shut them up! Now, what intrigue me is that he was stealing glances at Chanyeol. I believe he was trying to get him out of his rage and focused on something else.
Missanion
#8
Chapter 4: I do believe that what Jongdae did was because of kindness and 'cause he really can't stand people (nobles mostly) mistreating and humilliating others (commoners) without a reazon, just for fun and to show how different in power, influence and education they are. I think Jongdae despises nobles who act that way.

Another thing I noticed is that Jongin seems to really understand Jongdae's behaviour and that Chanyeol reads too much into anything Jongdae does or says. He really analizes his words, his body language and gestures. For one that affirms to hate Jongdae, he pays and increasingly amount of attention and now complimented him hahahaha.
Missanion
#9
Chapter 3: I feel bad for Jongdae. Poor boy, his name surely weights a ton over his shoulders. He must think throughfully about every step and decisions he takes. He must be careful about what he says, his manners, everything is too much. Besides all of that, he has to deal with people who approach him all the time seeking for his attention , the commodities, adventages and favours that being with a Kim brings.

Thankfully Chanyeol noticed that much and decided to be a little more friendly and considerate in his own way with Jongdae. The kitchen part was cute and funny and Jongdae doubting about taking the cooking book broke my heart 💔! Poor baby was on kitchen duty and thought about learning a little by reading a book!!! Why so tender? WHY? ? Chanyeol has to understand that being born in the most wealthy family wasn't his fault,neither having a lot of maids that don't let him do anything because they sure are ordered to do that and he is educated that way. Maybe his family would be scandalized if he was near the kitchen or about to do any shores haha.
Missanion
#10
Chapter 2: Owww Chanyeol was childishly polite and considerate with Jongdae haha. He doesn't want to admit it though, but he worried about him not eating at all.