Star, Moon, Thunder and Sun

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Things always get complicated when emotions get tangled. Just look at Jung Soojung’s love life, she always ends up getting caught up in a mess, though most of the time it really filters down to her bad taste in men. Byun Baekhyun however won’t shut up about the beauty of love and being open about emotions — after all, he is a hopeless romantic. As for a certain Park Chanyeol, he’s simply smitten but devastated at the same time because Soojung won’t give him the time of her day. And Go Hayoon? She’s stuck awkwardly by the sidelines, purposefully avoiding the spotlight while numbing her emotions because things never go well when matters of the heart are involved.

Foreword

Moon, Star, Sun and Thunder; a group of very intimate friends.

Moon, Star, Sun and Thunder always dancing in the sky.

But things were not quite that simple. Everyone was aware that Thunder loved Star. Sun was Thunder’s biggest emotional support in his times of devastation and frustration whenever Star refused to open her heart to Thunder. Every time Thunder felt crushed by the heaviness of the world, he sought comfort from Sun. Sun always came to Thunder’s rescue, whilst remembering to check up on Star and her emotional state, all the while neglecting something happening deep inside her. Moon meanwhile during all this was god knows where.

Then came the night for Sun when black and white blurred, everything confused and smudged. A night that Sun even now wonders “How? Why?”

“Sun, ponder on the matter, reflect on the matter. What is your emotional stand on the matter? How do you actually feel about Thunder?” whispered Moon to a dazed Sun.

“How I feel? He is a very very special friend. A very very important friend.”

Sun did not want to destroy this precious friendship they all shared. Sun did not want this balance to be broken. Sun did not want complicated feelings. Sun was scared of love. But Moon persisted, kept on nagging and finally, Sun gave in. Finally, Sun faced her own emotions.

“Yes, I have feelings for Thunder. But in no way does that mean I wish for anything to happen or develop between us. It would be pointless.”

But Moon being the hopeless romantic could not understand why Sun would back off without a fight, because Moon believes, any love is worth fighting for.

“But what is the point of fighting a battle where I am already losing? What is the point of risking this precious friendship that we have? Losing Thunder as a friend would break me more than my feelings being rejected. Losing his trust would shutter me more than me never being loved.”

And so it was that Sun finally stopped running away from her own feelings. And so it was that Sun finally admitted out loud what everyone was suspicious of. Moon made comments in the past about how Thunder was being blind, going for Star instead of Sun, but would could Sun do? She was utterly helpless.

 

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Characters:

 

Name: Go Hayoon, the Sun

Likes: coffee, chocolate, peace and quiet

Dislikes: making promises, facing own emotions

 

Name: Byun Baekhyun, the Moon

Likes: love and romance, making Hayoon smile (after all the Moon can only shine because of the Sun)

Dislikes: being left out, when people he cares for gives up on themselves

 

Name: Jung Soojung, the Star

Likes: attention and being right, getting what she wants

Dislikes: having to deal with conflict

 

Name: Park Chanyeol, the Thunder

Likes: Jung Soojung the only star in his sky, pestering Go Hayoon with his loudness

Dislikes: secrets and not being in control

 

 

Featuring:

Oh Sehun

Kim Jongin

Kim Minseok

Do Kyungsoo

Possibly more

 

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So, I've been a lurker on this site for pretty much a decade now, and finally I am writing something of my own (please take it easy on me!). We shall see how this turns out. Hopefully some of you will enjoy the story. Currently I am still contemplating whether to make this one long story, or have a sequel as a separate story. So yeah, embark on the adventure of the Star, Moon, Thunder and Sun with me yes?

 

Editing started: 10th September 2020

Editing ended: 12th September 2020


Story submitted to BAD HABITS --- // writing contest //

kit_kat_rat
Done editing this story. I have to say, Sehun is really the best boi in this story haha

Comments

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Erponnn108 #1
Chapter 38: Wahat a rollercouster experience. Thank you for your amazing story. Glad i found your story. Bless u
DoubleDoublePark
#2
Chapter 38: This was fantastic! You really portrayed their emotions and actions well.
fransiscasu04 #3
I just got recommendation for this story, finished it in 2 days, and I can't be more thankful. This story is really great. Nice plot, nice diction, balance ammount of romance, friendship, comedy, angst. This story really made my day. Thankyou so much for this story.
808aff #4
Chapter 38: Throughly enjoyed this story. Great development and nice comedic timing along with the angst. Off to read the sequel.
anitaklr24
#5
It looks interesting.
I will read it.
KimmyNurry
692 streak #6
Congrats on the bid! ^^
Baekhyunsoul
#7
Chapter 37: I think the whole story was a love story but of learning love and how to let go when necessary and how to receive it.
Baekhyunsoul
#8
Chapter 32: Omg I was not expecting that but I can’t say I’m too surprised by that kiss
Baekhyunsoul
#9
Chapter 31: As warm as the sun can be, one often forgets that it’s a ball of fire and you can be burned
Baekhyunsoul
#10
Chapter 30: Oh my gosh he’s with the mean girl 😲