Chapter 14: You’re good. I see that English isn’t your first language so, the grammar errors can slide. Some parts of the story feel rushed in a way that you don’t allow your characters to develop properly.

The story is good. Good job!

Chapter 14: A história está incrível, obrigada pela atualização.

Chapter 10: awwww.. .. they are so sweet ??

Chapter 10: Im hoping for a good ending :'> but this was really fluffy :>>

Chapter 9: Don't even make any rash decision Byul Yi, be confident in yourself to protect Yongsun.

Chapter 9: Aish.. sure was a tense visit.
Thanks for updating.

Chapter 8: Really enjoying this story please continue it

Chapter 8: Hi, please continue the story. Though the whole fiasco between nayeon vs byul isn't really my cup of tea (i cant really take fight scenes well especially if its my bias, but hey it's my preference as a reader, hope you dont take it seriously tho lol), i find it entertaining and im genuinely interested on whats happening next. I assume English isn't your first language since I've encountered few *minor* grammatical mistakes (like only two lol) but a bit of rereading on a certain part you're not confident on would really help you but its fine, we readers dont mind those. Im writing this comment to encourage you, as an author, to never stop on what you're doing ESPECIALLY if you truly enjoy it. If you discontinue it, it's fine because you have your reasons. :) trust yourself in the whole process x

Chapter 7: please continue this story author-nim. it was great story. I really want to know why Krystal distance herself from Moonbyul after hears Moonbyul's past.
thank you for update author-nim and please consider to continue this story

Chapter 7: Thanks for the update can’t wait to see what comes next