A prayer

The Heart of the Moon

The moon shone brightly today. Sana was reminded of eyes that were the same colour. No. There was more silver in her eyes. 

It was cold. Sana rarely dressed to be outside for long. Despite it being spring, this night was cold. Yet she did not want to leave. She found solace here. It was quiet. Nature surrounded her, but she preferred to look up at the sky. At the moon. Perhaps if she spoke to it, the unwavering brightness would provide her with some answers. The one who drew it across the sky, however, changed from a gentle warmth to a harsh cold in a matter of minutes. It often depended on the person she spoke to. Sana only ever received one part of her. She wondered if that would ever change. 

Then she heard the softest of footsteps, the faintest rustle of a leaf. 

She felt a smile start to form. “Following me?” Sana asked. 

“You were formulating your thoughts as a prayer,” Dahyun replied, her voice just above a whisper. “And you rarely pray, let alone to me.” 

Sana turned around then to face the moon goddess. Her breath caught. 

The moonlight made her pale skin adopt a silver glow. Her eyes were even brighter, as though the silver in them had turned molten. Her hands were closed around a bow of pale wood, an arrow notched in it. 

“Were you planning to attack me?”

Dahyun returned the arrow to her sheathe in a smooth movement. Then she frowned. “No.”

Sana knew that, but to probe at a goddess known for her patience, it was too great an opportunity to miss out on. 

“To save me?” 

The frown turned into a scowl. “If you have no need of me, then I will be going.” Dahyun's skin began to glow even brighter. 

“Wait.” Sana reached out to take her hand. Her skin was warm to the touch. “I—” the words stopped. 

The other goddess did not look discomforted in her presence. Sana didn't want to say something that would change that, but she knew she would fail. 

"Yes?" Dahyun hadn't left immediately. She looked at Sana, confusion apparent in her eyes.

"I wanted to see you.” 

“You already were,” Dahyun pointed at the sky, “so my being here is hardly necessary.” With a flash of silver, she disappeared. 

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Author's Note

A tiny taster for the story. It was born from select scenes manifesting while I'm on the bus to and from destinations. It's a dynamic I really enjoy and I hope you will as well. 

See you in the next one!

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A_B_J_Ch #1
Chapter 11: Now, I am quite disappointed. I knew I was getting into this story with it not being finished. But now, seeing as there is only one chapter left, it is quite frustrating to see it in such a state :(
A_B_J_Ch #2
Chapter 10: It is a very interesting view - the juxtaposition of the ancient gods and the modern technology and its findings. I would also add on to Dahyun's concerns with a thought whether the gods are indeed immortal, or if they are connected to the lifespan of the Earth. But that could make for even bigger existential crisis :)
sxn_penguin
#3
Chapter 11: great story, i love it so muchhhh ಥ‿ಥ
when will you update again author nim???
MarinhiAnjo #4
Reading again because I miss the fic...
RuinedHeathens
#5
Chapter 11: I've come to read this again. The last time I was left just a bit numb and speechless, like I've internalized their argument. Dahyun as I would see her is another victim of 'searching answers to only find endless more questions', a god showing symptoms of existential crisis and a bit of depression somehow, find this funny n sad. Sana had it coming, the confrontation I mean, but Dahyun was unfair, pouring her frustration to that one who truly cares. I wonder how it all wraps up. It's as if as Sana grew and gain better perspective of herself by knowing Dahyun, Dahyun had the opposite and lost herself. Anyways, sorry for the rambling. Dont mind us. Thank you and hoping you have great day authornim!
lourin #6
Chapter 11: these makes me thinking about the birth of god/goddess, like if they just suddenly pop out of nowhere and worshipped by human . lol
i always think dahyun as a loner and sana came around bothered her at first but then warm up with her presence. then when she needs someone to talk, sana avoided her and that made her upset.
dahyun as goddess explore the moon, something that she associated with, then having doubt about her existence really fresh perspective to write. where do you get the inspiration came from? really like how you write different perspective about this.
anyway, thanks for the update :)
37michaeng29
#7
Chapter 11: this physically hurt me :(
loveonly #8
Chapter 11: Oh boy. Honestly, this conflict is something that had to happen. Dahyun is full of doubt over her own existence why wouldn't she doubt Sana's intentions? Especially considering their history. I am surprised it's the second to last chapter. And sad because I don't know how this can end well. :( It feels like either Sana or Dahyun or both of them will have to lose. But still, thank you for the story. As a Greek mythology nerd I enjoyed this new phylosophical take on these familiar faces. It's a very unique story. Even if it did bring my own existential qualms to the surface again lol.
conatozakim37
#9
Chapter 11: Reading between the lines is far more challenging than anything you'd have to face in this world. The situation of both goddesses are really frustrating. I mean, I get where Dahyun's coming from. It's hard to accept the truth of what she just discovered about herself, especially when they were born to think that they were supreme beings. But I think Sana as of the moment is carrying more burden. Whichever she chooses to pursue, it is guaranteed that she's going to break her heart either way. And that's saying a lot, considering that she is the goddess of love. It's like breaking her being. I'm really curious what would happen next.

Didn't expect it to become as angsty as it is now. Great job author. I hope you find the drive to continue writing. This and The Wrench are definitely one of my favorite works in this site. See you on the next chapter, I guess? :)
teddiebears #10
beautiful! i love this so much, thank you