Melting Snow

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{AU} He was exasperated, but there was a sparkle in his eyes that hinted that he was not very upset, “You were not listening at all were you?”

She opted to just ignore his question and turned to look out at the brilliant snow falling from the Heavens. It was now snowing hard, almost as if it were the last time it would snow. Perhaps it would be, for her.

“The snow is beautiful.”

Foreword

This is a fictional one-shot that I wrote on the first day of winter. The "universe" in this story does not exist and the setting was loosely adapted from ancient Chinese civilizations.

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mollyswag123 #1
Chapter 1: This was a truly beautiful story and written in such a beautiful way. I love that you slowly through the story tell us about her past and I love the way you describe the surrounding environment, letting us imagine the two of them standing there in the snowy winter day. It was just soo gooood. I was ready to cry when she "died" and he was screaming out her name, crying. But when I read the last sentences I have hope l that she is alive, which makes me soo happy. Omgggg I can't get over this. Sooo gooood!!!! More of these kinds of stories please <3
Champions27
#2
Chapter 1: So she didn't die?? I almost cried reading this story but it was beautiful, the words you used to describe her thought is really beautiful