Make It Better

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Description

When pain is too unbearable for one to carry, 

When the world is too much of a burden to live in,

When the silence is too heavy,

When the loneliness is so strong that any interaction causes disruption inside....

That's when we are in most need of someone to save us. 

To guide us.

To light our path again. 

 

This is a story about how Jiyong and Seungri come in terms with their struggles and create an unbreakable bond. 

 

Foreword

Hello!

I hope you will enjoy my story! I have written many fics before but I wanted to try one with BIGBANG members!

Please do comment and upvote! It will be very much appreciated!

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Angiekiedis85 #1
Chapter 11: My poor Ri my poor Ri🥺 I would have loved an extra chapter to have a little glimpse into Jiyong's future, after Ri. thank u authoring this was lovely sad buy lovely
JIRI8890 #2
Chapter 11: I'm cry cry 😭 beautiful story
ninadebrov23 #3
Chapter 11: This iss soo beautiful authornim. The way you portrayed their characters and the ending are cheff kiss. Im crying 😭💙
starrider5 #4
Chapter 10: I'M ING SOBBING THIS WAS TRULY BEAUTIFUL 😭😭 i love your writing so much!!!!
bhoomika #5
Chapter 11: I cried so hard😭😭 TT it was really beautiful author-nim♥ all yours words inspired mee!!thank you so much for the story😍
Dollhouse32123 #6
Don't mind me, I'm just re-reading because I can't afford therapy, okay?! 😤
Is not like that's my favorite story or anythi- ok, being the Tsundere is not my role in this ship dynamic...
Angelicat #7
Chapter 11: I cried so hard with this story, the feelings, the intense love, I totally fell hard for it. Also I remembered the song “R.O.D.”. I love your plots, they are so different and also in someway I can connect with them, thank you :)
TOPkat #8
Chapter 11: You hit me with the lana del ray Young and beautiful. Having me crying. This story is soo beautiful and heartbreaking. I absolutely love it.
haennaseyo #9
Chapter 11: I really cried. This is heartbreaking and beautiful. Thank you
Dollhouse32123 #10
Chapter 11: So bittersweet: at the same time is heartbreaking all the scene played so beautifully in my head in that way you described.
The atmosphere of all the chapter actually gave the ending a tone that felt more realistic, even being sad the scene and their dialogue was so romantic. Is it weird that I it made the story even more heartwarming to me?
We knew this would happen at the last chapter, and I loved how you deal with them talking about how Seungri would spend his last days and how he said he wanted jiyong to be happy after him.... That dialogue made me cry, you explored the most sad part and didn't felt tragic, instead explored their perspective on it in a manner emphasized their love for each other and how Seungri's last days would be as good as they both can make it.
It makes you really feel the meaning of the title, reinforced how much they were important to one another, added a very necessary and beautiful scene.... I absolutely loved this epilogue, thank you so much.
Congratulations for everything, I really thought you could not make this one better.
("Young and Beautiful" don't just fit on the story context, but the fact is on the "The Great Gatsby" movie, and here our Korean Gatsby is about to pass away... it might be alternative universe, but it gave the tears an extra push...TT) Keep up with the great work! <3
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