Chapter 1: Hi! I've decided to re-read this fic after we chatted on twitter and it did remind me why gayle recommended your stories to me. I loved how you portrayed their youth and their innocence on this oneshot with the right amount of angst. it kinda frustrates me that it's a oneshot but then I also love how you ended it lol thank you for writing this :)
Chapter 1: I know it will end tragically, it just radiates that kind of vibe at the first parts. Maybe I'm really used to angst that I already built my own detector.
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