Nostalgia

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Jongdae has never been good at letting go of the past. There are too many memories, too many emotions for him to relinquish. In his refusal to act like they never existed in the first place, he continues chasing these precious memories that are akin to falling leaves. However, he doesn't realize that this is preventing him from maturing into the blossom he sees in his reflection.

Although spring is supposed to bring new beginnings, Jongdae is still living in the autumn of past endings.

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Foreword

This is my submission to the SURPLUS! Poster-Based Writing Giveaway hosted by ann1914! Once I saw the poster, I knew I had to write something inspired by it and thus, this story was born. I also need to get back into writing regularly, so participating in this giveaway is definitely motivating me to pump out content more consistently. It's been awhile since I've written an OC x Idol story, but I'm excited to change things up again and return to my roots.

Thank you so much for reading, and please feel free to check out my other stories and projects! I read and respond to all comments, so do let me know your thoughts as you read the story! Subscribe for updates and upvote if you're enjoying the story! ^^

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Thank you to ann1914 for the beautiful poster!

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Imprisonment (rewriting) - OC x Yoon Doojoon
A Year to Remember (rewriting) - OC x Dong Youngbae (Taeyang)
Hesitation Tango (coming soon) - OC x Kim Kibum (Key)
Thanks for Everything (completed) - OC x Lee Jeongmin
Caramel Sun (in progress) - Han Geng
One Plus One Equals Three (in progress) - Zhang Yixing (Lay) x Byun Baekhyun x Kim Jongdae (Chen)
The Meaning of Perfection (in progress) - Do Kyungsoo (D.O) x Kim Jongin (Kai)
One Wish (completed) - Do Kyungsoo (D.O) x Kim Jongin (Kai)
Two Halves of a Heart (in progress) - Yoo Kihyun x Chae Hyungwon

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Shoes of a Unicorn Writing Contest - OPEN
From Head to Toes Writing Contest - CLOSED
Pearl Aqua Dreams Writing Contest - CLOSED
Starry Knight Writing Contest - CLOSED
Scent of a Rose Writing Contest - CLOSED

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ann1914 #1
Chapter 1: Oh my goodness. I finally had the time to actually sit down and read this story in one swoop. I hate to break up my reading especially if they're long because I might forget the little details. So I tried to read this in one go, haha. Apologies for the lateness!

But really, this was such a lovely story! The amount of details you painted along with the countless imagery enabled me to create a moving picture of what happened in my head. It was awesome! The subtle things that others would perhaps consider meaningless to include fitted in quite nicely. Being more visually inclined, I really enjoyed seeing the little movie unveil in my mind. ^^

Can I say, though, that I loved Chanyeol in this story, haha. Chanyeol's threat, with a devilish grin, might I add - "I never joke when it comes to the spine. That would be unprofessional of me" made me laugh~ And it as nice for Jongdae and Yunseo to bake a cake for Chanyeol even if they aren't great in the kitchen. It's the thought that counts, right? I love cheeky Chanyeol though and his snarky replies, hehe.

Yeonseo was relatable. I would be frustrated with a relationship like that too. Honestly, I would probably do the same - I'd genuinely wish for the other person's happiness regardless of our differences. I'm glad to read that she was able to move on and was able to find another form of happiness. The way you characterized her while meeting Jongdae at the cafe in the present time - I wish I can be as nonchalant like that, aha. As for Jongdae, that was admirable of him to not press a second relationship further. He knew their chances were over and he managed to accept that fate. The way you depicted their last goodbye was heartbreaking but with the added detail that he was genuinely smiling and wishing her the best made the emotional burden feel lifted. He finally felt acceptance after all the guilt and denial that it felt satisfying to know that they've both moved on (somewhat).

Thank you for writing this lovely story! I can honestly say with a hundred percent certainty that Nostalgia found a great home! <3
AliceReverie #2
Posted on September 21st and is about Autumn & Nostalgia?
It feels like a birthday present! XD Will definitely be awaiting this!!!
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