Chapter 1: I like the story, the melancholy of it and all that, but i think you miss tagged "hwabyul" as "wheebyul"? I think you should changed that to avoid confusion and lure more hwabyul shippers in ^^
Chapter 1: Your concept is good as is the plot of the story, but since you chose Wheesa to hurt in the end, I don’t like that ? Angst doesn’t really fit them, but people love angst lol
Chapter 1: I feel sad for wheein. Wish she didnt give up that easily. Really like your last part. Like still giving wheein's hope even if it's on her next life. Thank you for writing :)
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