Chapter 1: Ummm a sequel? Yes please! I’m so glad you asked! Lol. But seriously this homely, soft scene was so well written! Imagine what you could do with a scene (*vividly imagines amazing things you could do*). Your family dynamic fits the characters of jiyong and youngbae so well. Bc it seems so realistic and true. Like they still have their friendship/companionship throughout the story like they have in their “real” life, so it makes the story seem a lot more realistic which supports the story so much and makes me as a reader desperately fall in love with it. The fact that they have a child together! *cries* and when Youngbae was being naughty with jiyongie...oh how I miss you continued so we could see just how much attention jiyongie’s husband was going to give him. Anyways, your writing is quite good. It was an easy flow which makes it easier to comprehend and read. That’s an extremely essential thing in writing and you nailed it! Also, your sentence variety in structure and vocabulary are unparalleled! Continue to write please! Especially GDYB! There aren’t enough of them and I’m so terribly deprived. Once again, well done!
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