Machiavellian

Description

 Cho Kyuhyun never thought he would be the one do do something against the law. After all...he is a prosecutor. But meeting her was going to unsurface the evil in him. For a price.

Nina Ahn never imagined an enemy could be such a good companion. She somewhat enjoys seeing him falling deeper in coruption.  But what will be the price she has to pay?

A test perhaps, on their moral compass. A test to see how evil, dark and two-faced  people are in reality. 

A story in three parts: Awakening, Adrift and Demise. 

Can they past the machiavellian test?

Foreword

Machiavellian /ˌmakɪəˈvɛlɪən/     adjective: Machiavellian

  1. 1. cunning, scheming, and unscrupulous, especially in politics.

    "a whole range of outrageous Machiavellian manoeuvres"

    synonyms: devious, cunning, crafty, artful, wily, sly, scheming, designing, conniving, opportunistic, insidious, treacherous, perfidious, two-faced, Janus-faced, tricky, double-dealing, unscrupulous, deceitful, dishonest; 
    antonyms: straightforward, ingenuous

 

Looking at this page in the dictionary, Kyuhyun wrote down in pen another word. ME? 

He wasn't sure anymore. Could he go back to being just a prosecutor or had he crossed that line and there was no turning back?

If he crossed the line, did he do it all by himself or did she push him over?

What if he had always been like that?

Author's Thoughts
kiddcrazy
hey guys... I've been thinking the name doesn't sound so attractive.
i would love to hear your thoughts on what suggestions you have regarding the title.
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Queue8823 #1
Chapter 4: Hello, I just get to finish all four chapters. So thankful that there are still few Kyuhyun x OC writers as they are rare to find. I appreciate that you take time to establish Kyuhyun's character here. Hopefully you intend to finish this well-written story.
gaemaker #2
Chapter 4: I'm going to ponder about the quote above, ignorance - root of all evil.
gaemaker #3
Chapter 3: Oh anyway, dont feel insecure. I think there's not many of us who still stay with aff but i think there's still many silent readers who are lazy to even comment to your hardwork. Well they Got to read for free so yeah, don't worry. You're great as always!
gaemaker #4
Chapter 3: Im reading this chapter again now! Wow you never failed to live up to my expectation! The suspense was delivered well!
gaemaker #5
Woahh you updated! Thank you!
gaemaker #6
Chapter 3: Your writing is good as usual, haven't lost your touch. Good length of the chapter too! That's new and different from how you write each chapter previously - lengthy and satisfying haha
gaemaker #7
Chapter 3: Woahhh he said yes? And the woman is the so called the lady boss? Nah i dont think the story is bad. Kyufic readers here majority have left this site you know. So many other usual friends/kyufic readers here have stopped reading from aff i guess. You know there's other site such as wattpad where people write fanfic there also?
gaemaker #8
Chapter 2: Heyy sorry just got the time to read! You know what i really like about your writing is you explain the main character's emotion thoroughly and in detailed. That's great. To really feel the depth of the character's feelings, thoughts etc. Helping readers to understand better.

It's not always easy to write narration involving the real facts of laws etc. You can't just anyhow write the processes without checking it on your side and let readers read the wrong facts. So thank you for the effort.

About Kyu, the whole chapter justify much on his decision and what influenced his mind and action to hire someone to kill - fear and hopelessness. That's terrible feeling really..i hope kyu is in a safe hand! And his family too!
gaemaker #9
Chapter 1: Wow. Interesting. Kill to save people huh. Nice description of how frustrated Kyuhyun was and how his mind was busy thinking and deciding to do this. To hire a killer
gaemaker #10
Woww i thought you won't be writing kyufic anymore, A! Such a pleasant surprise. Great vocabulary and title up there! My first came across this word. Nice description too as always. Wow, kyufic in English. My hope is restored. There's oneshot, 2 version written by another kyufic writer on the recent month but a kyufic series of chapter wow i missed that alot. All the best!!
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