To the Dawn

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Three friends stumble upon an ancient artifact while exploring, and unleash horrible forces on the town. Now it's up to them to fix this.

Foreword

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Written as a response to the challenge I received from MissMinew in my Head to Head Contestusing the prompt "Body Temperature"

Also entered into the 2020 Variety Writing Contest using Prompt #9: Character makes a mistake that could doom the world. They must undo this mistake somehow, before more people die, and also using special challenge #4: Turn a character you like evil, even if it's just for a while. 

Entered into the writing contest...

 using two prompts... this one  and
    If only I knew that your day will come. I should’ve said everything I wanted to tell you; because right now, that chance I had is gone forever.

Also entered into

using the prompt

2. What could I become if I stopped worrying about death, about pain, about anything? If I stopped trying to belong? Instead of being afraid, I could become something to fear. - Holly Black, The Cruel Prince

-Tigress-
AY... SO its complete. The first ten commenters after October 1st will get 500 karma each IF their comment can be considered constructive criticism.

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MissMinew
#1
Chapter 4: Oh, damn. You would've totally won the Head to Head contest! I feel so bad for Mingyu, but I'm also strangely curious as to the demon and what is /was/. What a bastard creature, though. The green glow was scary, there's a reason I'm not into caves, haha. And while I'm glad Seungkwan and Vernon survived, the toll it must have taken on them, to hear their friend be accused of "going crazy" and "being a murderer" when they both knew there was something else there, something they couldn't explain and something nobody would ever believe - that's so taxing mentally. No wonder they just left in the end. Started anew. I hope they get some time off and while the trauma still stays with them, it just -- ugh, I want to hug them and say sorry. </3
DGNA_Forever
#2
Chapter 4: This had a bittersweet ending, and I'm glad Seungkwan was able to dispose of the knife. It's sad that the thing took so many lives, including Mingu's. I'm glad that Seungkwan and Vernon will be able to continue their lives and hopefully not continue to carry too much guilt over it all.
This was a nice story and I love the friendship in it. Thank you♡.
DGNA_Forever
#3
Chapter 3: I felt so bad for them, and for the other people caught up in this terror. I hope Seungkwan can someday believe that this wasn't his fault, and also come to terms with what happened to Mingyu, as well. I hope Vernon will be okay, too.
This is a very interesting story, and I like how you've put it together. The only thing I can say is to watch typos, but I like it overall.
DGNA_Forever
#4
Chapter 1: Oh goodness. This first chapter was creepy, and I look forward to reading the rest of it. I'm really curious about the scratches and also Mingyu's strange behavior.
WR_Supplier
#5
Congrats on the ad slot feature!
Ghad20
12 streak #6
Congratulations
caffemelon
#7
Congratulations!
southavenue 29 streak #8
Chapter 4: congratulations on winning the bid!
up-and-adam
#9
congrats on getting the bid!!! (つ´∀`)つ
midaexiu #10
Chapter 4: Well that was scary *shivers* I mean, caves in of themselves are already scary enough for me hahaha, and then you go put some evil freaky glowing monster-artifacts in there? I love the way you described everything, especially the green pulsing heartbeat that disappeared inside Mingyu. The horror when they got out and found the dead bodies was pretty realistic. It would be so impossible to believe and yet there it is in front of your eyes. I feel the most sorry for Mingyu in this. Killed and taken over by an evil creature, everyone thinks he's a mass murderer, how sad :( I'm glad that Vernon and Seungkwan didn't die though!!! I was worried because it's horror genre, but that was a big relief ^^''
I spotted a couple of typos throughout but all easily fixed! Good luck with the contests!!