The Last Summer

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It was the last summer that Seulgi, Jisoo, and Yooa would all be together; everyone was headed their own separate ways in the fall. They would make the best of it and were determined to make this summer one to remember.

Foreword

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OH GOSH  a challenge answer to JasminWesson99, who challenged me with this prompt in my Head to Head Contest

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ShimizuTheShizzShota
#1
Chapter 1: I have to say that the entire thing was a bit emotional from the fact that they are on a trip to a foreign country to their heartfelt talks with each other. Overall, I really enjoyed reading about each of their views on their own lives and each others', especially when even such close friends only saw how "good" everyone else had it. Great job!
spreadloveyeah
#2
♥️ Remember you are loved, please always be happy♥️
Amalya
#3
Chapter 1: For not having written something in a while, it's certainly not a bad start back into the process. It's a little rough around the edges and your grammar isn't as spot on as usual, but those are easily forgivable. haha To me, it did feel a teensy bit rushed, but I will say, that statement of "It's like you hate me," really gave it a strong point to launch into the whole conflict resolution part. And goodness was that relatable. Sometimes change, especially when it's not us changing, hurts, and that can come out in many different ways.

All of their jealousies and insecurities were entirely understandable and it was entertaining and endearing to see the way they may not have defended themselves but they were certainly quick to defend each other. I found it to be a rewarding story and one that reminds us to really look at what we do have and to be happy for those we care about when things are changing, especially in positive ways. I definitely would have liked a little bit more at the end - some kind of nod towards the rest of their trip or getting ready for the wedding, but in general, the ending wrapped up nicely and offered a bit more hope for Seulgi as well.

So congrats for getting this up and out there and thanks for sharing. ^_^