Of Journal and Butterflies...

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"BANG!!!" I saw him shooting my bestfriend.

I tried not to scream.

After that gun shot, there was a long silence.

Breaking it in another gun shot.

He shot himself too.

Still shocked but I have to go inside.....

Foreword

Annyeonghaseyo!!!

This is my another fanfic.

Together with my best buddy  awesomenessoccurs ....

This is an entry for a contest in 

We're ELFs! (JOIN THE CLUB NOW!) ..

 

Awesomenessoccurs as Kim Aeleen

Superminnie as Park Nikki

Lee Sungmin as Lee Sungmin

Lee Donghae as Lee Donghae

This fic contains ANGST..

SAD..

TRAGIC..

and CHARACTER DEATH..

Enjoy reading!!!

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silverseaturtles #1
Hey you guys, when are you gonna start the new story?! I've been antipaticipating your new chaptered version of this. When are you gonna post it? I check like every day!!
See, this is how much I wanna read it!!! ^_^
I'm sad you guys haven't started it yet.......... :(
doubledutchress #2
This is good <33 I agree that it's better if you a added a few more chapters to make the story more clearer. But all-in-all, good job for making me sob in awe ;AAA;
silverseaturtles #3
Oh My Gosh, was this sad......
but I think it would be better if this story was chaptered instead of a one-shot. I would have loved to read something about how Nikki and Sungmin meet, Sungmin's feelings about Nikki and Aeleen and how torn he's feeling. Another thing that ma be easier to portray if this was chaptered is Donghae's and Sungmin's relationship. Though, you say that they are good friends, the reader doesn't feel that way.
I loved the ending (Donghae was a bit OOC at the end) since it was unpredicatable.
Fighting! ^^^ I hope you write more soon. And thanks for commenting on my stories. And no, Superman by Super Junior is not the correct answer. Keep looking ^^^^^ Wow, this was long. I'm gonna tune out now.
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