I Can See You

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         Seungwan held her breath when she can now hear the soft crying from the corner of the toilet which is right on her left. Turning, she can see a girl figure crouching in the corner and suddenly look up and gazing at her with her red eyes and sinister smile. Making seungwan groaning frutatingly. Oh gosh not again

Foreword

So this is an alternate universe fic between Twice x Red Velvet. The main pairing is irene x tzuyu, joy x sana, wendy x jihyo, yeri x chaeyoung, and seulgi is kinda already have a girlfriend in here LOL. The other members of twice is being featured. so who's up for doctor red velvet au? :D

kimchaejigae
I have an indo fanfic with the same cast tho.. Should i write the english version of it? 😴

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qwertyuiop1216 #1
Chapter 1: Aaaaaaaaaa.... I need moreeeee. This is very good author-nim
ByulSunHwaEein
#2
Chapter 1: waaaa this was a fun read!
Juliani_
#3
Chapter 1: This is great..
~♥~~♥~
LonelyBakahead
#4
Chapter 1: English version go go go! A great story, I love it!

I would like to suggest an app called grammarly, authornim, it helped me writing my english essays and it should do the same for stories too XD
han_now
#5
Chapter 1: This is so good and exciting not a fan of long chapters but you got me hooked.. said you got another indo-fic, english version please
Izarakovic
#6
Chapter 1: LOML I'M GLAD I DECIDED TO VENTURE AGAIN TO THE WENHYO TAG TODAY LMAO

Why are the doctors so cool omg I want a Seungwan or a Joohyun in my lyfe. Their adventure lmao I feel both pity and I laughed my off at their predicament XD

WenHyo's convo at the start lmaoooo did Wan had just made Jihyo pregnant or what I'm literally Nayeon in that particular situation o(๑≧∇≦๑)o

Joohyun is so cool omg I cannot with her. But really I laughed when Joohyun says that Tzuyu is a 'small girl' like, babe, you're half that Taiwanese's size XDDD

Sana is aggressive alright ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) but don't say you don't like it Sooyoungie I know you're thirsty #eh

Chae and Yeri are adorable XD and I love it when Yeri suffers akakakaka that last part tho. Chae your Yerm is traumatized how could you do this to her XD

I'm so touched with Hyunnie and Wannie :"))) sacrificing themselves for their beloved akakaka I hope Wannie gets more payment than just a kiss ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) *get slapped*

Your English is real good ^^ of course there are some mistakes here and there but everyone makes them so it's okaayy XD I suggest you to try to use grammarly it helps me a lot. Though, well, it can only help much :"D

If you want to make "Things" in English then by all means go ahead ^^ don't let it stress you though just keep on doing what you want to do ^^ I don't think it's really necessary because I love how I can read "Wah daebak jadi saya yang disalahin masa" "jadi nyari gara gara sekarang?" "Wah bego sih aku kalau gitu" and read Seungwan ngegombal in Indonesian XD maybe you can finish it first before you translate it so it won't be so burdensome ^^


Hwaiting authornim :*****

P.s : I read Yeri's your head with the tone of "Ndasmu" and I JUST CANNOT- AKDHLAKDBKALALA WKWKWKW GOOD JOB YERIM
ps. Are there any english word that matches the impact of : "MAMPUS KAU" if you know some tell me X"D
Msmusicful
#7
Yes please, I would like to read an english version of ur indo fic :D