Treacherous

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Based on the lovely sh5ojkmt's movie prompt! It's not going to exactly follow the movie since I haven't found the time to rewatch it so I'm gonna base it on what I remember... but still, don't click if you don't want spoilers!

Due to my incapability of keeping things short, this will be chaptered ^^;;;;;;;

 

Foreword

 

Taemin was born a prince, a prince conceived from the sixth Queen. He was far in line to the throne, having many a half-sibling. Every month, his father– the King– held a small feast, gathering all his Queens and children, after which Taemin would be forced to sit with the other princes and princesses, all of them going on and on about the royal politics– at times taking advantage of the fact that the crown prince, Jinki, the King’s son from his first wife, was away trying to establish good relations between the neighboring kingdoms– to criticize him and instead put themselves ahead as worthier heirs. Taemin was least bothered– he had absolutely no interest in being the King. He did not know what he was interested in, or what would become of him... but he knew one thing. He wanted his life, whatever it may become, to have that one person whom he held the dearest.

 

He was yet again forced to one of these gatherings. Sitting at the table arranged in the gardens under the shade of the trees, Taemin often lifted his gaze from his plate of dessert, running his fingers through his dark golden hair, conscious of his beloved’s gaze. His green eyes tried to settle on him discreetly, to steal a glance at least. And like always, his eyes eventually met warm, brown ones. Taemin looked away, but the other was still watching him from afar, knowing that Taemin would be bored and soon irate in the company of his half-siblings. And when Taemin passed him by through the archways a while later, he handed him a red rose discreetly. It took only that much– one rose and one coy smile, and it wiped every turbulence away from Taemin's heart and mind.

 

His beloved, the owner of those warm, brown eyes was named Jongin and he was a young, brave knight.

 

He was quite like the knights from the many tales Taemin had read in their library… and Taemin felt exactly like those corny protagonists– utterly besotted.

 

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[Treacherous] The epilogues are finally up! Tysm for staying with the story this long and all the love ♡

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Beau1996 1333 streak #1
Chapter 12: Binge reading and loving every chapter - excellent story with such a good emotional journey!!
Beau1996 1333 streak #2
Chapter 12: Binge reading and loving every chapter - excellent story with such a good emotional journey!!
Beau1996 1333 streak #3
Chapter 3: I can't believe I haven't read this story before but it's so good!!
Ronak2min
#4
Chapter 6: ok-Dear king :/ Taemin didn't take a single sip ok? what the hell... if you didn't leave we would have some TT
I mean... I know I'm a ... but it's just so... damn
Y_Y
Ronak2min
#5
Chapter 7: the moment taemin found out-the ring he was wishing wasn’t there… and it was TT
There are so many emotions in this single one. I am aware of all of them… but this one… I couldn't believe minho Gave up just like that(ring and stuff)
T_T
Ronak2min
#6
Once more... the Best ^_^
OdetteSwan
929 streak #7
Chapter 11: Taemin asked, "Why me?"
So, when I saw that there was a Prologue, I knew the answer is in it. Minho had set his sight on him even before Taemin knew of "Minho's existence".
I really love this chapter because it brings up the idea of choosing happiness first as "the King who cannot choose his own happiness cannot choose happiness for his people." I love this idea and Minho embraced it fully. So, thinking that Taemin will be happy with Jongin, he pushed him away from him.
I also like that Minho was the onw who planted the roses!
I don't know how you do it but you write with deep insight and loving heart! Thank you so much.

Btw, ALTCL and ISU are really my favorites among your many stories. But this one is threatening to take the lead! Hahaha! But wait, I also love With Every Fold. Oh dear!
OdetteSwan
929 streak #8
Chapter 10: "They both were where they belong."
I really love it when you close your stories in words that are so heartwarming.
Thank you so much for sharing.
OdetteSwan
929 streak #9
Chapter 9: Finally! The cat and mouse situations were killing me!
OdetteSwan
929 streak #10
Chapter 5: Minho chose Taemin with his heart's eyes.
Taemin should start seeing that because Minho had always treated him with utmost respect and kindness. He should also take Jinki's words to heart.