Deliquent

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Kai is a delinquent with a bad attitude and a mean streak. Sehun is a kind, smart kid with a promising future. These two boys hate each other but find themselves forced together to save Kai's failing grade and to remove the strict leash on Sehun's life. Life becomes different for both of them when they find out they have more in common than they thought.

 

This is a re-upload of an old fanfic I really loved on my old account. I have everything already edited and revamped, so it won't have any impact on the production of my other stories

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Lotus_Girl
#1
Chapter 27: I can't found sequel 😭😭
karmenll
#2
I hate myself for reading this fanfiction so quickly! I need more waaah! Everything is so perfect. I love how things ended well even though everything was hella ed up :). I always love this relationships that go from hate to love! It just makes me happy to see them together after hating each other and also finding good in each other. That Jongin was bad at first and then changed into good/better; Sehun being all perfect/good and then showing his bad side showed that /everyone is good and bad at some point/ that nobody really is good or bad, but it depends on what you want and will show to others, also what others will see in you (like Sehun saw Jongin good, while his mother had him for bad *I guess?*)
I got very emotional everytime you showed those dark sides of life like depression, family abuse, bullying, suicide,.... It was all ed up, but with friends and "Jongin's love" it all just went on better. Everyone needs and should have someone like Jongin, Taemin, others who helped Sehun go through hard times. Jongin however had a horrible way of helping Sehun or Teamin. Like dude, they are all down and you yell at him and tell him to shut up. Dumb Jongin, but his character actually gave me a feeling like he was presenting /everyone/ who got in touch with a depressed person. In a lot of cases people don't know and understand how it is for those who experience depression and other, making them horrible at helping them.
However I am sure if I would NOT enjoy being around Jongin while depressed. His acting around Sehun and Taemin when they were down was not the best *sigh* and around him I would feel like I was wrong and bad, because of what I did. It would make me just feel worse probably. Luckily there was Taemin to help Sehun, since Jongin was just like *don't try helping, coz you don't have ideas how to. Just love Sehun that's all*. I am glad that at the end Sehun (+Teamin) were all good.
That switch from bad relationship with family members and later good was heartwarming. Sehun and Jongin's families were ed up to the point where I thought everything was going to just get worse, but the end was actually good. Jongin was good with his father, Sehun with his mother (already was with father.... so....). I also liked it that they accepted Sehun like he was and that his mother stopped trying to make him /perfect/.
Even though Sehun and Jongin changed a lot you kept his personalities like they were on the begining of the story. I liked Jongin's temper through the story and while reading I feared you might change him to the point where he wouldn't be the stubborn kid he was. Of course you didn't disappoint!

I don't get it how someone can ship Sehun with Tao, but after so many stories I just got used on it ahahhaha. Tao chilled too much when he came back with Kris. He knew Sehun was all down and just decided to show up like it's no big deal. He knew he was hurting Sehun and was just like "yea, okay, whatever,". I was deying everytime Tao was around Sehun, coz I knew things were only going to go down! Arghhhh~

Also.... This fanfiction changed me too... I literally said aloud around everyone else which was a miracle, because I don't really curse ahahah (only writing I guess hehe). Everyone just stared at me and gasped when I said it. I blame this fanfiction for making me a bad girl okay.

I will stop here. I could praise your fanfiction(s) to infinity though!
Stay safe author and hope to see man many good fanficions in future! Have a nice day and keep up the good energy! Loved you, love you and will love you!
karmenll
#3
Chapter 11: Okay I cried. Sehun hella reminds me of myself (I only didn't eat pills with alcohol in a bathtub yet). It made me so sad and hurt. Poor Sehun doesn't deserve any of this like everyone else. I like how you showed that /you can speand a lot of time with someone who is depressed, but won't notice it!/
I got a feeling like you (author) just poured your life in it! I don't know, but I like to write about things that I experienced and feeling that I feel, so I just got a feeling like you are kinda same? I hope you are doing alright and stay happy, because nobody deserves being depressed, cutting, abuse, suicide. It's cruel. Stay safe please and happy. Keep Sehun happy with Jongin and I hope that anyone else reading this also stays positive and away from that cruel world!
Love you~
karmenll
#4
Chapter 9: I feel like reading this fanfiction way to fast, but ijust can't hep myself. I am too curious to find out what will happen! I also have a feeling like i read this one before.... Idk just parts maybe? Maybe I just lirked a bit here ahahhah.

I love SeKai a lot again. Love their hate-"love" relationship. Also damn their parents (n Taemins) are hella horrible! Who would be like that to their own children?! I am glad they got each other to take care of.

However Jongin got a lot of influence on Sehun. He made him more "free" and I like it. Also I am not that up for smoking and a part of my mind is like "no", but why do I find them hot smoking?!

I see Sehun hated Jongin, but suddenly they hang around freely, buying food, taking care of each other. I like the change~

I should save some capters for later, but... I want to know what happens!

Love you author, take care and have a good day!
karmenll
#5
Chapter 1: Ahahhahahaha I love this language! Jongin using wirds so well (so actually you who made all this so perfect)! I love his personaltiy, but hey I hope he get's gis kicked coz he deserves it!
I see this story on the top of my favs list!
karmenll
#6
Oka I need something to read again and I know I can always find good fanfictions from you~ Gonna read this, since I am not gonna wait for others to get completed. Let's start!
Soufiyyah
#7
Chapter 13: awwww this is so cute!!!! and i love yifan
Soufiyyah
#8
Chapter 8: duhh ofc, it's taeminnie we're talking about. you know? the gorgeous angel?
Soufiyyah
#9
Chapter 3: the teacher was cool though XD
thepeachills #10
Chapter 13: oops, looks like I dropped my uwu