Love is in the people – if you look close enough.

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"Yunho has this strange habit of losing and picking things up. 

You all have lost count of how many things he has forgotten in dance rooms, backstages, coffee shops as well as the incredible amount of the ones he has taken up from tables, shelves, offices. And they’re not candies, pens or simple pieces of paper, they are always important things: the keys of your apartment, mobile phones, your dinner.

And your conclusion is that this strange habit of his somehow applies to Jaejoong too. Yunho picked up Jaejoong from the streets that night of some years ago, saving his from a fight he couldn’t win, and somehow ended up keeping him in his pocket. And Jaejoong started growing there. Like a wild rose, he started spreading his leaves and blossoms around Yunho, embracing him in that strange way of his."

Foreword

title: love is in the people – if you look close enough.
author: supernavy97
pairing: yunjae

 

This is a very experimental fiction.
The story is narrated in second person from a character i won't spoiler now, but who you'll get almost as soon as the story begins. I said it is very experimental because i wanted to narrate Yunho and Jaejoong's story from another point of view, for once, and while writing it - although finding it extremely challenging and exciting - I also ran into some difficulties, so I hope everything turned out clear, but in case not, please mind that this is kind of a first experiment for me.

Anyway, the story is divided into three parts. Part One has been written down completely, and I'm moving on to Part Two. However, as I'm very busy with uni / exams and I also have to write my graduation thesis, please be aware that I don't know when I will be able to post the two following parts (not very soon, that's for sure).
I do intend to finish this fic though, so, sooner or later, there will be an ending.

This said,
I hope you enjoy this story as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Thank you for reading, subscribing or commenting it. It really means a lot to me.

 

- Benny

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NinePlusOne #1
Chapter 4: Great story & CM perspective, you wrote this painful story with grace & positivity. Hoping the best for real life Yunjae.
JaeBeloved #2
Chapter 4: I really appreciated having this told mainly from Changmin's pov, because in a way we are also that third party onlookers. Seeing YunJae evolve and grow into two individuals and yet remain loving is beautiful. In whatever capacity that may be in the future there will be Yunho and Jaejoong in some way or another. So proud of Changmin for overcoming adversity and doing so with grace, and most of all, very happy he was able to find that kind of love he always craved. Thanks for sharing!
Kattan69 #3
Chapter 4: At least this story has a beautiful ending.....thank you.
rooose #4
Chapter 4: your story is so beautifully written it brought me joy. Thank you
yunjaemrcnn #5
Chapter 4: Amazing! Thank you for your hard working
yunjaemrcnn #6
Chapter 4: Amazing! Thank you for your hard working
aerithloud #7
Chapter 3: The way you captured changmin-jaejoong-yunho relationship, them separately, as a trio and as a couple was so beautiful.
yunjaemrcnn #8
Chapter 2: Thank you for the update! I've been waiting for this!
luna00 #9
Chapter 1: It was soooo good. It's written amazingly and so realistic. I hope you will give us a second part soon. Lots of love
JaeBeloved #10
Chapter 1: Of course Min would catch on, he spent a lot of time in between Yunho and Jaejoong. Their affection is like a gravitational field, it's a force to be reckoned with. Caught in it's orbit it's difficult to escape it's grasp. Being at the mercy of a fickle audience and an cruel society it must be extremely difficult to come to terms with their feelings. Knowing the repercussions that can befall them if they brake from the mold they're expect to fill, it's no wonder they've suffered in silence for so long. Like Min, I hope there's a way they can obtain happiness. Thank you for sharing!
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