Our Love Story: The Chobom Timeline

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When Park Chorong and Yoon Bomi bravely pursued their dreams of becoming members of an idol girl group, they never expected that finding true love would become part of that equation. This is Our Love Story: The Chobom Timeline. 

 

Foreword

A/N: Fictional work based on real life and references. Enjoy~ (newly revised 2020)

 

Preview

 

She looked scary. She wore a school uniform but her charisma was through the roof. She had a fierce unnie aura with her black shoulder-length hair and tanned skin. She had an enviable high nose and petite lips with dark intimidating eyes. Yeah, her looks were no joke, but she looked even cooler when she danced. Her dance moves were sharp and on point, clearly stronger than everyone else. The way she moved seemed to come natural to her. She was a quiet wildcard and left promptly after the training, barely speaking to anyone. 

Her name was Yoon Bomi. She was scary, but oh so cool. 

 

She was pretty. Bright eyes, cute lips, a smooth nose. She had long straight brown hair that bounced as she moved, and she had quite the potential from her dancing alone. Her dance team was brave enough to be showing some midriff for their routine, and wow. She was close to having abs too. Her beauty and dance stood out amongst her dance team. Then she started speaking and... whoa. Her voice was unbelievably cute. 

Her name was Park Chorong. She was a really pretty unnie. 

 

 

ckaz99
Ch21. Flirty— I finally made it to Remember era *^* after teasing it so long. hehe, it's been too long T.T

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Oppaunniee #1
finally an update. will wait for next chapter
cbennh_tjsthysys #2
Chapter 15: THIS FIC IS GIVING ME SOME CRAZY MOOD SWINGS LIKE I WAS CRYING 3 MINUTES AGO AND NOW I'M SMILING SO HARD THAT MY CHEEKS HURT OMG
EarlySpring
#3
Chapter 21: Hi!

I've read all 19 available chapters in the past week and I got to say, I'm genuinely impressed with what you've accomplished with this story so far. A very well developed story. It's beautiful and heartwarming. The characters show so much vulnerability, it is impossible to be unmoved by their journey. And all the efforts you've put in following real life events is outstanding.

One of the many things I love about this story is how Chorong accepted early on that she is in love with Bomi, even though she hasn't come to terms with what it means about who she is and about her uality. I love how you show her internal turmoil on the subject. I love the way you slowly, subtly, make her grow and discover more about herself with each chapter. I especially love those few moments when an unwelcome tought crosses her mind and she instantly reprimands herself for it. It's something I've never read in a story before, but that is so relatable. We're all guilty of it sometimes.

I also love how you depict Chorong's growing attraction for Bomi with each chapter, through a moment, a thought or a touch. It happens slowly, gradually, naturally.

And the way you wrote about Bomi being always patient and accepting of Chorong's pace through their relationship and the physicality of it; and then got the story and their relationship to the point where, in chapter 18, Bomi is the one who needs to take a step back when Chorong reaches under her shirt... Just, wow. Seriously, I'm in awe of how this story unfolds and progresses. Everything feels so true, realistic and authentic.

Also, the references at the end of each chapter are once again very appreciated!

Thanks for writing this story, I'm looking forward to see what happens next. <3
Oppaunniee #4
Update pliss ??
Oppaunniee #5
Chapter 21: I'll wait for next chapter... I can't wait..
Panda0619
#6
Chapter 21: Finally, another chapter!!

I thought it was intriguing that they talked about it.. yet, it's important for keeping the bonds tight.. that's a really good idea actually..

Miss the twin photoshoot.. that was so good!!
phouse
#7
Chapter 21: your references link at the footnote just make me miss chobom more TT
happy belated chobom day!
Aredwhite
#8
Chapter 21: Happy Chobom day!
Justanordinarysone
#9
Chapter 20: thank you author!! its really good!! i really love how you put in the real life events into your story as well + the references at the end!! ♡ i can tell that you really put a lot of effort into this so thank you so much T^T
i will be looking forward to the next update as well! :D
Panda0619
#10
Chapter 20: Thanks for the update I've anticipated for so long.. posted on my birthday too.. ah the ending of this chapter.. sends hearts fluttering..

Just what we need in a slight chobom drought.. =)