Chapter 1: I definitely loved the chapter! But the story is marked as completed... I was expecting a second part.
Is there going to be a 2nd part? Please :c
(Sorry for my english)
Chapter 1: The intruder fear is completely understandable, and I really put myself in Chorong's shoes through your words, sooo scary. The buildup at that part was astounding! It's like I was there right with her, heart pounding in my ears as the door handle was jiggling ominously, yikes. I've always loved how well you set the scene.
I also really felt the impact of that relief. "The person she feared is the one person in the world she doesn't need to." The first time I read that, oh my goddd. I think I froze. And then proceeded to give the biggest awwwwwww~~ Of course this is amazing. Drunk touchy-feely Bomi is adorable and Chorong can't resist her asdfsds. This story gives me so many feels because of all the detail, their behind-story just trickled throughout: that Bomi would be there to welcome Chorong home, that Bomi would calm her down, that Chorong stole Bomi's mug, even the placement of the car keys and the ing floorboard I can't-
Chapter 1: To many fluff for this chobom day! Wow! And as expected of waving panda~ this is so good! I love drunk Bomi! Thank you for writing this authornim!
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