Chapter 1: The pairings are good as is. Tzuyu should have to work to get Momo, though, a lot of humbling and an elephant dose of politeness towards others should make the relationship more believable.
Usually overfed characters, like Tzuyu seems to be right away, require getting off their high horses with force to be well accepted by the reader. It would be entertaining if Momo really is interested in someone else, maybe already have a girlfriend when Tzuyu gets interested. Cliche, but works with the scenario of k-dramas.
2Na are already on the same level, but they are easier to relate to, though it's expected for them to be out of touch with the real world sometimes.
And JeongHyo are going to have trouble, it's clear, but they seem to work quite well.
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