Rebirth And Will Love You

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Everyone deserve a second chance. But Xie Li Na certainly know that she doesn't deserve it.

All those mistakes she committed earned a good punishment. And she had received it all.

But still that man's sad eyes makes her feels distressed.

'Shen Yun Tian, this time I will love you. I promise'

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Reislaufer #1 Feb 10, 2019 04:29:31

great story

EnchanteurW #2 Feb 8, 2019 12:51:12

Chapter 1: Oh ! This story starts really well (i.e. very badly!). It's brutal...
The staging of the first scene is good, first the break-up scene, then a flashback of the relationship.
It is striking, factual, the very fast rhythm, without dead time and without useless states of mind.
I don't know if the rest is at that level, but now I'm catching on, which is rare.
The part where Li Na hurts Ru Feng (which motivates revenge) is not very clear, I have trouble understanding what happened and why he is so angry with her.