This Beautiful Lie

Description

Joohyun told Seulgi that they she fell out of love with her. Seulgi's heart broke and she started living in a lie that she tried hard to believe was true. Maybe if you genuinely believed that lies are true, you might find out the truth.

Foreword

"You can't go! You told me that you'll stay forever!" Irene shouted.

Seulgi smiled one last time. "Thank you for making me believe in this lie, Irene." Seulgi tries to walk into the abyss which leads to the real world but Irene won't let her. She clings onto Seulgi's arm.

"You yourself said that lies can become true if you make it happen... and this all happened so how can you say that?" Irene asked, tears flowing down her cheeks. Seulgi doesn't smile. The abyss's bottomless pit makes Irene shiver, afraid to lose Seulgi. Seulgi doesn't know whether Irene is a fantasy or not but her words are so convincing...

"I..." Seulgi breathes.

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sewcret
#1
Chapter 1: wait ok so this is what i was thinking (and i dont know if i misread anything so dont hate me if im way off). so seulgi passed out after crying and woke up in another version of herself (?) and in that place/dream she was married to irene which is just joohyun but in another world (?). what i was thinking is that irene also lost her seulgi but different way as seulgi lost joohyun. idk thats just what i came up with. This is so good, the emotions, the characters, the plot, it's all just incredible. Thank you for writing this masterpiece that I will definitely be rereading! I loved the idea and the execution way just so amazing. Stay happy and healthy <3 (p.s. Irene also gets a happy ending in my book so she has her own Seulgi now!!!)
eonnifan
#2
Chapter 1: so... irene is real? it's not happened in seulgi's dream? and... how long is it? i mean, the moment joohyun asked for break up(?) to seulgi woke up (from her dream?) ? and... the voice that seulgi heard... not from/in her dream????
Kaz012_ei #3
Chapter 1: Without the last notes, it's confusing as to what happened. Although, some parts are still not clear. Why would something that happened be a lie?
royalsunsets
#4
Chapter 1: seulgi was dreaming a whole relationship with irene with a span of two days or so while she was sleeping the night joohyun broke up with her, it’s a lot simpler than i thought. nicely written tho~
katykim
#5
Chapter 1: It got a bit confusing but I admire your effort to share it with us. Thank you for this, an incredible story.
seulgomm
#6
Chapter 1: Its abstract, a little bit confusing but I like it. I guess Seulgi suddenly entered into a parallel universe or something maybe?
seulgittarius
#7
Chapter 1: I don't understand the whole situation. True, Seulgi's moving to another universe where she dated Irene after breaking up with Joohyun. The thing is, why would Seulgi call Joohyun after her confession and Joohyun all of sudden saying "don't ever leave me" when she is the one who fell out of love and left Seulgi at the first place. So confusing.
Ardem_Joseph23
#8
Chapter 1: So the other one is a make up world??
Tae_Sumi
#9
Chapter 1: OOF ME LIKEY BUT I FEEL BAD FOR IRENE. IRENE MY POOR BABY