W four worlds - 12

W two worlds - Season 2 - four worlds (US)


EPISODE 12



#1. FLASHBACK - Ren-Bo's bathroom (morning).

In the shower, Ren-Bo gently her wings with a soft sponge.
She's in a good mood and sings.

- Lala ~ woosh ~ pot-pot ~ lala. (weird song)

Ren-Bo stops the shower and steps out of the booth, .
(We see nothing indecent: face, legs, arms only.)

The bathroom is bright pink.

She passes the towels, without taking one to dry herself.
She smiles at herself in the mirror. A wink, then she leaves.



#2. FLASHBACK - Ren-Bo's bedroom (morning).

Wet, Ren-Bo walks to the bedroom's center.
(Flowers and decorations in the foreground hide her , s, buttocks, etc.)

- No need for electric dryer.

FLAP-FLAP-FLAP. As she laughs, she flaps her wings, producing a continuous blast.
Objects fly away, sheets on the desk, flower petals.
The wooden planes hanging from the ceiling spin in the wind.

Once dried, she looks in her closet what she might wear.

- I need a bathrobe that lets my wings protrude.

The backs of all the clothes she sweeps up have holes in them.

- (sudden thought) What if Soo-Bong comes to see me today?
- I should put on a little makeup...

Ren-Bo goes to the bathroom, still , singing.

- Lalala ~ Wizzz ~ Tip ~ Tip ~ Tip.

Her song makes no sense. It sounds like fast drum machine sounds...
... interspersed with synth loops and weird sound effects!



#3. FLASHBACK, Ep11 - Ren-Bo's bathroom (morning).

Ren-Bo opens the bathroom door, when...

- Hiiiiiiiiii! (sees Soo-Bong sitting on the loo, with his pants down)
- ... !!!!! (startles, the manhwa he holds leaps out of his hands)

They look at each other, equally apoplectic.
Ren-Bo looks at her lower body and realizes that she is .

Embarrassed, she hurries back to her bedroom.



#4. "Real World" - Iksan Prison, Surroundings (night).

Sang-Deuk's car arrives in sight of the prison.



#5. Iksan Prison + In Sang-Deuk's car (night).

Sang-Deuk sees the vehicles parked in front of the main gate.

- ... ?!!

Sang-Deuk turns off the headlights and parks away from the parking lot.



#6. Iksan prison, Parking lot (night).

Hidden in a bush, Sang-Deuk observes the parking lot with the zoom of his camera...
Streetlights illuminate trucks, vans, cars, with the "W" logo.
Technicians carry projectors, white screens, cameras, microphones, clothes to the gate.
A security guard and a policeman guard the area.
Sang-Deuk locates Kang Chul's car, parked near the gate.

- (disappointed) He came here just to work as an actor?
(thinks, frowns)
- (suspicious) No, he's up to something bad...
- (convinced) For some reason, it's going to happen here.

Sang-Deuk sees Kang Chul getting out of his car and entering the prison compound.



#7. Prison main hallway + Sung-Moo's living room (night).

On each side of the hallway, cell doors.
Kang Chul walks here, following technicians carrying the equipment.

BRRZ! His smartphone rings, he picks up.

- Yes, sweetheart?

Yeon-Joo is at the entrance of the bathroom, deserted.

- Honey, Soo-Bong just went back there!
- He was in the bathroom and isn't anymore.
- ... (breathes in, concentrates)
- And your plan, did you carry it out?

Yeon-Joo closes the bathroom door and returns to the tablet.

- We didn't have time!
- ... ! ("")
- What were you planning?

Yeon-Joo holds Soo-Bong's notes: scrambled handwriting and some sketches.

{MANHWA INSERT - Soo-Bong's sketches and notes.}
¤ Jin In-Jin's wife and her butler.

~ Soo-Bong wanted to use Jin In-Jin's wife.

¤ The butler spreads gasoline cans in Jin In-Jin's office.

~ She hates her husband, and wants her company shares back.

¤ The top floor of the building burns, flames come out of the windows.

~ She attacks the one thing he loves and burns his insect collection.

- A ploy to divert his attention from Ren-Bo?
- Yes. Soo-Bong wrote some other ideas, but it's messy.
- It's a temporary solution.
And impossible to achieve while Soo-Bong is in the manhwa.
(anxious, thoughtful)

{MANHWA INSERT, Ep11 - Jin In-Jin's plan, volume 5.}
¤ Jin In-Jin, on the roof of his building, under the helicopter:
"I have a plan to legally add this artwork to my collection."
¤ Secretary Min reads a book: "Moral harassment - First cause of suicide in companies".

- ... ! (reassured)
- We have time!
We know the entomologist's plan.



#8. FLASHFORWARD, "Butterfly Girl" - Jin In-Jin's building, Underground Parking (morning).

~ It took him weeks to get Ren-Bo to commit suicide.

Next to a black van and an SUV: a team of henchmen, suits and dark glasses.

Jin In-Jin arrives in a hunting suit, a rifle slung over his shoulder.

The men bend down to greet him.

- The special equipment?
- We have it, President.

The leader of the henchmen opens the SUV's trunk.

(looks at the trunk)

Inside, automatic or semi-automatic rifles, scopes.

Ammunition magazines. Some are wrapped with ochre tape.
On top, a label with a gray circle striped with black lines.

- Perfect.
- Here are the location areas. (tends a map)
- (cruel smile) Let's go butterfly hunting.



#9. "Real World" - Prison main hallway + Sung-Moo's living room (night).

- As soon as Soo-Bong gets out of the manhwa, it will be quick.
- Jin In-Jin must be eliminated radically.
- I will plan a sequel to--
- (lightning thought) No, wait!!
- ... ?!!
- There's a plot hole!
- ... !!
- Ren-Bo was 24 years old in volume 5, and had a degree in horticulture.
- Currently, at 20, she is too young for Jin In-Jin to hire her.
(distressed, biting her nails)
- Check if you can draw on the tablet.
- It's the only way we can influence what's going on there.
- (nods) I'll try.
- See you later. (hangs up)



#10. Sung-Moo's Living Room (night).

Yeon-Joo reaches for the electronic stylus, but the pad is empty.
She inspects the table and the pots, no stylus.

- Where did he put that?

She looks on the floor, under the table, nothing.
She doesn't bend down enough to see Young-Sik's radio transmitter under the trestle.
She opens a cabinet drawer. Inside a box of the same brand as the tablet.
She opens it but the box is empty. Underneath another similar box, new and closed.

- Ah!

Yeon-Joo unwraps the box, and takes out a new electronic stylus.
She tries to turn it on but... the battery indicator says "discharged".

- What a bummer!

Yeon-Joo puts the stylus on its pad, a flashing light indicates charging.
Impatiently, she looks at the tablet, a drawing materializes.

Soo-Bong and Ren-Bo leave her house laughing, and...



#11. "Butterfly Girl" - Ren-Bo's garden (morning).

... they dissolves from "image" to "real".

- (laughs) Oh really!
Never make me such a joke again!

- I assure you, I barely control my appearances and disappearances.
- Impossible to know where and when I land!
- You are a poor magician, but I still like you. (pinches his cheek)

{FLASHBACK INSERT, Ep10 - Ren-Bo's bedroom (late afternoon).}
Ren-Bo is sitting on the stool, while Soo-Bong is drawing her.

- Well! As long as you don't ask me to get ...
- (naughty, teasing) Although you could make a funny face!
- ( laugh) Hi hi!

{FLASHBACK INSERT, Ep11 - Ren-Bo's bathroom (morning).}
Ren-Bo enters her bathroom , while Soo-Bong sits on the gogues.

- Hiiiiiiiiii!
- ... !!!!! (startles, drops everything he's holding, looks up)

- At least you made a really funny face!
- Yah! Didn't you see yours?!
- Yah! You were the most ridiculous!
Sitting on the toilet making a poop!
- With all this mess, I didn't even wear makeup.
- You know, you're just as pretty naturally...
- Tsss, flattering! (nudges him)
- I've prepared something to make up for it, though.

Soo-Bong shows her Mister Green Hands.

The garden gnome is in the same place as before, identical.

- What?
- (bends down, examines the gnome) It looks so much like him!
- (notices the details) No... It's really him!
With the red bump on his nose.
- Unbelievable...
- How could you... in such a short time?
- (smiles secretively) My magic gift is more accurate for that.

Spontaneously, Ren-Bo gives Soo-Bong a peck on the cheek.
He is shy. Ren-Bo notices his embarrassment with a mocking look.
To help him relax, she puts her arm behind his elbow.

- That way. (points to a wooden shelter and leads Soo-Bong to it)



#12. Ren-Bo house, Hut (morning).

Parked under the shelter, a pale pink scooter.
It's round and retro, with funny eyes as headlights.

- I have to go to class.

She goes rummaging around in a locker further under the shelter.

: (worried) We'd better get out of this house as soon as possible.
: But will she be safer at her school?
Should I alert her of the danger?
: I have to draw my plan.
But for now, she is not emotional.
: Or is it too early?
Seeing her could have ended the chapter.

Ren-Bo comes back holding a light vintage helmet (which doesn't hide the face).
Her other hand is hidden behind her back. Yellow wings.

- You, you're in trouble today!
- That's the second time you show that worried face.
- Ren-Bo, where are your classes?
- Today I'm going to a greenhouse in a remote village.
: Perfect, an unknown place in the countryside.
But I mustn't lose sight of her.
- And you, what have you planned for today?
- Um, nothing special.
I'd like to go to the countryside to get some fresh air.
- Gosh! Why wouldn't you come with me?
- It's such a relaxing place that you'd die without noticing.
- In that case, I'd be glad to.
- I didn't dare to ask, but I wanted to stay with--

Ren-Bo pulls out her hidden hand, laughing.

She holds a second helmet!

- Me too! (gives him the helmet)
- I hope you know how to pilot this. (points to the scooter)
- ... ?!
- If you get on the back, you'll crush my wings...
- I was a motorcycle courier in the army! (winks)

Soo-Bong mounts the scooter and starts it up.
The headlight turns on, close-up of the blinding headlight.



#13. Real World" - Iksan prison, film set (night).

Close-up on a blinding movie spotlight.
A propsman removes Kang Chul's blue jacket and puts a black one on him.
A make-up artist takes care of him.



#14. Iksan Prison, Visiting rooms (night).

Kang Chul arrives near a visiting room.

Han Hyo-Joo and the film crew stand here.
Director Jung Dae-Yoon is in a good mood and makes hearts with his fingers.

- (raises his two index fingers)
Empty the out of your ears and listen carefully.
- This is a major scene!
- Oh Yeon-Joo is in prison.
Kang Chul visits her in this hole. (points to the visiting room)

{IMAGINATION INSERT, Jung Dae-Yoon - Iksan Prison, Visiting Room (day).}

Kang Chul in front of Yeon-Joo. She refuses to speak and lowers her head.

~ Oh Yeon-Joo refuses to confess that he is an imaginary character.
- I love you since the first sight...
- Oh my impossible love, you are a cartoon character!

Kang Chul and Yeon-Joo look at each other sobbing, transfixed with happiness.

~ But Kang Chul confesses his feelings to her, so she reveals the truth.

("what is this crap?!")

The technicians notice Kang Chul's expression and smile.

- (a hand to the heart, exaggerates the emotion)
A declaration of love behind bars, the emotion will be vibrant!
- (ironic) A real fairy tale...
- ... !!! (scandalized, but says nothing)
- If he was already sure of his feelings, why would he then commit suicide?
- Suicide? Where did you see a ing suicide in the scenario's sequel?

{FLASHBACK INSERT, W Ep05 - Sung-Moo's living room (night).}

Kang Chul shoots Oh Sung-Moo.

{FLASHBACK INSERT, W Ep06 - Han River Bridge (night).}

Kang Chul drops from the bridge.

~ After he shoots Oh Sung-Moo. What is this stupid ques--

- You should read the script of the following episodes, my little coconut.
- ... ?!
- Suicide is definitely not the temperament of such a ballsy hero.
- And with such bull, we'd have the parents' associations on our .
- (exasperated) Are you kidding me, Director Jung?

{FLASHBACK INSERT, Ep01 - Han River Bridge (night).}
Kang Chul stands on the parapet, sad and thoughtful.

- I thought my destiny was in this world.
- But I was wrong, my destiny has always been here, on this bridge.

Kang Chul closes his eyes, and lets himself fall into the void.

~ We already shot the scene where I jump off the bridge!

- With that dumb monologue!!!
- Who's to say it's a real suicide, and he died from it?
- (annoyed) That's insane!
- Why would he throw himself off the bridge then?
- To clear his mind?
- ... ?!! (unsettled)
- It's just a typical case of conscience crisis!
- Do you jump off a bridge when you question yourself?
- Me no, but Kang Chul yes.
- (shakes head, derision, disbelief)
This conversation becomes delirious to the point of absurdity.
- Everyone goes to that damn bridge ONLY to commit suicide...
- (points to himself, exclaims) BUT NOT ME?!
- How would Kang Chul manage to kill himself by jumping from there?!

{MANHWA INSERT - Cliff by the sea (day).}

Child Kang Chul jumps into the ocean from a very high rock.

~ It's less high than the rocks he used to jump off as a kid!

- Your abracadabra story doesn't make sense.
- The proof that the bridge is high enough.
I jump the first time, after my year in prison.
- Tttt...

{FLASHBACK INSERT, W Ep01 - Han River Bridge (night).}

Kang Chul is hanging over the void and holding the bottom of the railing.

~ It doesn't count, Kang Chul catches himself with one hand.

- Everything makes sense!
- (exasperated) Aaah, that's not true, that...
- (exasperated) What? What? You want to start that again?
- You gonna piss me off for a long time like that?
- Even without this fake suicide idiocy, Yeon-Joo would never confess like this.
- (to himself) He's decided to piss me off for a long time...
- Director Jung, you admit that Oh Yeon-Joo has a strong personality?
- ("what is he getting at?") Of course, otherwise she wouldn't be the heroine...
- So, she's not the kind of woman who would confess anything...
- (slaps his palm with his fist)
... just because someone gives her a sappy spiel!
- How so?
- (excited) You have to put pressure on her!

{FLASHBACK INSERT, W Ep04 - Prison, Visiting Room (day).}
Kang Chul is facing Yeon-Joo in the visiting room.

~ She hates prison, so Kang Chul has to play on her anxieties.
- You will face contempt, fear, and they will destroy your mind.
And it could last twenty years.
(scared, crying)

~ He must be harsh, telling the horrors she will endure if she stays there.

- That way she'll have no choice but to confess.
- (jaded) Oh, okay.
- Besides, that sadistic manipulator brought instruments of torture?
- A whip, pliers, a drill?
- Holy , you really want to sabotage the love story!
- Say, can't we hurry up?
- This prisoner's outfit makes me itch.
- I look so horrible in this, so...
- ... It's true that I can't see a man declaring his love to me.

(thoughtful and worried)

{RECALL INSERT, W Ep12 - Sung-Moo's living room + In Kang Chul's car (night).}
- Honey, Soo-Bong just went back there!
- He was in the bathroom and isn't anymore.
- ... (breathes in, concentrates)

- She's right, let's hurry up.
(surprised to see him give up)



#15. Sung-Moo's living room (night).

(thinks, absent gaze, in front of the tablet)

{RECALL INSERT - Sung-Moo's bedroom (day).}
- We must end this manhwa as soon as possible.
But it depends on the motivation of the main character.
- It will take more time, but let's leave it to Soo-Bong.
He will know that when he gets closer to her.
- Time... This is assuming that nothing unexpected happens...

The charging light of the electronic stylus turns green.

- ... !

Yeon-Joo takes it and turns it on.
She looks at the sketch of Jin In-Jin's wife, drawn by Soo-Bong.
She starts to reproduce it on the tablet.

- It seems to work.
- Maybe we can draw when the manhwa is quiet?

The drawing is not finished it fades away.

- No!!!

The tablet displays a new drawing:
Soo-Bong and Ren-Bo are riding the pale pink scooter, and...



#16. "Butterfly Girl" - Country road (morning).

... they dissolves from "image" to "real".
On the back of the scooter, Ren-Bo wrapped her arms around Soo-Bong's waist.

- (excited) I FEEL FREEEEE!!!
(smiles tenderly, but uneasily due to conflicting emotion)

Soo-Bong is both overwhelmed and happy to see Ren-Bo free from her suffering.
Ren-Bo calms down, and rests her head on Soo-Bong's back.
She has a dreamy smile, her gaze vague and moved.
Behind, her yellow and pink wings are waving in the wind.



#17. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room (night).

On the tablet, Yeon-Joo draws a butler's face.
The face is erased. Ren-Bo appears instead, on the back of the scooter.

: Why?
: The manhwa doesn't recognize me as a true author?

Yeon-Joo turns the page of Soo-Bong's notes.

- Or it needs something faster to draw?

She takes the notes and the stylus, then goes to the kitchen.



#18. Sung-Moo's kitchen (night).

Yeon-Joo tries to read Soo-Bong's messy handwriting, frowning.

- After... After the fire...

Unmindfully, she nervously taps the top of her hand with the stylus.

{IMAGINATION INSERT, Yeon-Joo - Jin In-Jin's Villa, Office (day).}
A turkey is on the desk, holding a pen in its beak and signs a document.

~ A turkey signs a fake financial document...

- ... ?!! (nonsense, struggles to read again)
- No... A traitor! Working for his wife.

{IMAGINATION INSERT, Yeon-Joo - Jin In-Jin's Villa, Office (day).}
Jin In-Jin is immobilized by a henchman on his seat.
The henchman forces him to drink a bottle of wine in one go.

~ A quick wine tasting and...

- ... ?!! (nonsense, struggles to read again)
- A quick killing!

{IMAGINATION INSERT, Yeon-Joo - Jin In-Jin's Villa, Reception Hall (day).}
Disco music, spotlights. Jin In-Jin is drinking and dancing with a lot of guests.

~ Will the manhwa accept... an impromptu party?!?

- ... (jaded, rereads the notes)
- An out-of-context or extreme event!
- ... !!!! (lightning idea, stops tapping her hand with the stylus)
(bewildered, looks at her hand, stylus on top, remembers...)



#19. RECALL - Sung-Moo's kitchen (end of the day).

Yeon-Joo cooks ramen.

~ (from corridor)
Noona, can I borrow a sweater from your dad?
- Yes, go ahead.



#20. RECALL - Sung-Moo's living room (end of the day).

Soo-Bong enters, wearing a gray hoodie.

- That shower made me revive.

Soo-Bong sits down in front of his tablet, and draws.

Yeon-Joo enters and puts two bowls of ramen on the table.

- What are you doing?

The features of a garden gnome stand out, on the tablet.

- Mr. Green Hands.

{FLASHBACK INSERT, Ep09 - Ren-Bo's garden (late afternoon).}
- I'm sad about Mr. Green Hands...
(looks at the damaged garden gnome in her hands)
- When you wake up tomorrow morning, he might be back...

- I promised Ren-Bo.
- (exasperated) You're screwing me up!
- Don't you think there's more urgent issue?
- I would do anything to make her feel better.
And not just because I love her.
- I so regret I drew this scenario so cruel to her.
- ... ! (understands, sudden regret)
- Noona, even if we could not foresee that she would become alive...
We owe her a debt.
(overwhelmed by remorse, lowers her head)
(looks sadly at Soo-Bong drawing)

Yeon-Joo sees a tiny brown dot on his hand holding the stylus.
But she's too distraught to pay attention to it.



#21. Sung-Moo's bedroom (night) + MANHWA.

(distressed, scrolls the manhwa pages on the computer...)

¤ Soo-Bong waters Ren-Bo's garden.
¤ A close-up on his hand holding the watering can. No dot or trace of injury.
Yeon-Joo changes the chapter and scans the pages...
¤ Soo-Bong is drawing Ren-Bo in her bedroom.
¤ A close-up on his hand holding a pencil. There! The brown dot is on top!

- ... !!
- It happened between these two moments.



#22. "Butterfly Girl" - Village, Street (morning).

Ren-Bo and Soo-Bong come by scooter.



#23. Village, Greenhouse Street (morning).

They arrive at a crossroads. Further on, a traditional house.

Behind the house, a long greenhouse.

They park the scooter at 20 meters of the house.



#24. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's bedroom (night)

(breathless, remembers...)

{RECALL INSERT, W Ep08 - Penthouse, Kitchen (night).}

Yeon-Joo cuts her finger with a knife and bleeds.

- Why are you bleeding?
- ... ?!
- It means that if you are shot, you will die.

{RECALL INSERT, W Ep08 - Sung-Moo's living room (day).}

Yeon-Joo looks at her wedding ring and bandage.

- I became a comic book character.
- So I can bleed and die?!

(very worried, grabs her smartphone and goes to the living room)



#25. "Butterfly Girl" - Traditional house, Courtyard (morning).

- You will be in this greenhouse? (points to the greenhouse)
- I have an hour of theory class first.
- Sorry, you will be alone all day.
- I'll take the opportunity to stroll around.
- (smiles) See you in the afternoon.

Ren-Bo enters the traditional house.



#26. "Real World" - Iksan Prison, Film set (night).

Kang Chul puts on his blue jacket.

- Yah! Kang Chul!
- You see that when you do it without arguing, it's easier?
(concerned about "Butterfly Girl", prefer not to react)

Director Jung mockingly walks away.
Kang Chul's smartphone rings... "Yeon-Joo".
He answers, leaving through the corridors of the prison.



#27. Prison main hall + Sung-Moo's living room (night).

- Honey! Ren-Bo considers Soo-Bong as her Oppa!
- (sighs) Not exactly a new disaster...
- But for Ren-Bo, it's very intimate! The equivalent of--

Kang Chul stops short, understands everything.

- A marriage proposal?!
He became a main character?
- He bled!
- (??) A new chapter has been publi--
- No! Chapter 128!
It sounds ridiculous but...

{FLASHBACK INSERT - Sung-Moo's bedroom (night).}
Alone, Kang Chul reads the manhwa on the computer. Without paying attention, he sees...
A picture of Soo-Bong. Several debris on the hand, grass, dirt, thorns.

~ ... He pricked his hand with a thorn in her garden.
It was tiny! Impossible to see!

- But he had a dot on his hand here! Is that--
- Never mind the severity.
Now he's vulnerable in "Butterfly Girl"!
- (worried) Just when real danger appears.

Kang Chul resumes his walk, fast.

- And I can hardly draw!
The manhwa keeps taking over!
- (annoyed)
Couldn't he have settled the bad guy's fate, before his sentimental story?!
- You didn't have to marry me before the time either!
- It was the fool who was my old self, not me.
- But no matter, let me think.
(waits nervously, bites her nails, shakes her knee)
- Draw what could reach the manhwa, despite its autonomy.
Only the simplest and fastest.
- Text, a letter, to warn Soo-Bong.
- Yes, and I will force one of the henchmen to betray Jin In-Jin.
- This is no longer the time for finesse.
- Do your best, I'll be back!

Worried, Kang Chul runs!!



#28. "Butterfly Girl" - Village, Greenhouse Street (morning).

(inspects the surroundings)
- I must leave nothing to chance.
- In case of emergency, I can get her from the greenhouse.
Then we can run away on the scooter.
- But to do that, I need to see the danger coming.
(turns his head and sees an old grain silo)

: It's high enough to cover everything at 360 degrees.
: And I could slide down the ladder to get down quickly.



#29. Traditional house, Classroom (morning).

Ren-Bo is with two other students.
The teacher shows some drawings.
It portrays clods of earth, and how to plant seeds.

: It's so obvious...
: Why does she want to harp on it so much?
- Yawww... (yawns with boredom)



#30. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room (night).

Yeon-Joo finishes drawing a message, in Soo-Bong's hand.



#31. "Butterfly Girl" - Village, Grain Silo (morning).

Soo-Bong walks to the grain silo.

- Huh? (stops, looks at his hand)

A paper is in his hand! He reads it.
"You are not invulnerable anymore. - OYJ."
Soo-Bong frowns, crushed by the seriousness of the words.
He takes a deep breath and resumes his walk to the grain silo.
VOSHHH! He is paralyzed by an invisible force!

Soo-Bong looks at the scenery... !!!

A plane reaches the sky's horizon in a flash, leaving a white line.

A bird disappears like a rocket.
Followed by dozens of other birds looking like tracer bullets.

The trees tremble and the clouds pass by at an incredible speed.
The sun makes a complete arc in the sky.

The time resumes its normal pace, in the late afternoon.

(understands...)

{FLASHBACK INSERT, W Ep02 - Avenue, Bus stop (night/day).}

Yeon-Joo's watch goes crazy, time accelerates as Kang Chul does nothing for two months.

(distressed!)



#32. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room (night) + MANHWA.

(looks at several drawings on the tablet...)

¤ In the classroom, Ren-Bo yawns with boredom.
¤ Underground parking, a troop of henchmen welcome Jin In-Jin.

¤ Jin In-Jin inspects the rifles in the trunk of his SUV.

- ... !! (surprised, scared)

¤ Last drawing, end of the day in the village, low sun.

Time sped up as Ren-Bo did nothing all day.

- ... !!! (understands, distressed)



#33. "Butterfly Girl" - Village, Street (late afternoon).

Soo-Bong runs to the traditional house and the greenhouse.



#34. Traditional House yard + Greenhouse street (late afternoon).

Ren-Bo comes out of the greenhouse and sees Soo-Bong in the distance.

- (calls) Soo-Bong!
(looks at Ren-Bo, then further away)

Soo-Bong sees a cloud of dust behind some houses!
VROOM! VROAR! Engine roars come from there.

- (frantic, screams) Ren-Bo!!! Quick, join me!
- ... ???

An SUV pulls into the street, followed by a black van.

SKRWIK! The van hits Ren-Bo's pink scooter and wrecks it.

- ... !!!!!

Soo-Bong runs, but not directly towards Ren-Bo.
He runs along the fence of the adjacent house.

- Ren-Bo, you are in danger!
- In front of me! (points in front of him)
(worried, does not understand)

PLUFF! Bright puff, Fairy Spark appears.

- Follow him Ren-Bo, or you will die !
- ... !!!

FLUFF! Bright puff, Fairy Spark disappears.

(in terror, paying attention to Soo-Bong's gestures)
- Meet me in front! (points to the end of the fence)

FLAP-FLAP-FLAP, Ren-Bo flies low towards the end of the fence.



#35. In Jin In-Jin's SUV + Greenhouse Street (late afternoon).

Jin In-Jin gives his instructions by radio:

- Put them down.

A man with a rifle gets out of the van, and chases Ren-Bo.

- Cover the center too.

A man with a rifle gets out of the van and heads for the center of the fence.

- (to driver) Goes around the street to corner them.
- (on radio) Get ready to disembark any second.

Both vehicles start moving again.
Jin In-Jin puts down his radio, but picks it up again.

- And shoot the guy with that. Conventional ammunition.



#36. Traditional House, Court (late afternoon).

Ren-Bo quickly reaches the end of the fence, while Soo-Bong runs towards her.
Soo-Bong's pursuer slings his rifle and pulls out a pistol.
He aims at Soo-Bong, 30 meters away in the open, in front of the low fence.
POW! POW! POW! The shots fly and shatter the stones of the low wall. VIZZ! KLAK! PTAK!
POW!... SVRESH! A shot hits Soo-Bong in the shoulder!!! Nervous shock!

- (horrified) Soo-Bong!!!

Gritting his teeth, on adrenaline, Soo-Bong continues to run...
POW! POW! ... VIZZ! TLAK! ...clumsily, blood on his arm, under fire.
The henchman raises his gun as Soo-Bong joins Ren-Bo at the back of the fence.



#37. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room + Iksan prison, Parking lot (night).

Yeon-Joo panicked, screams on her smartphone.

- Chul! They are being shot at!
- What?!

Alarmed, Kang Chul gets out of the prison and runs to his car.



#38. Butterfly Girl" - Backyard (late afternoon).

Ren-Bo and Soo-Bong are temporarily under cover, behind the back fence wall.

Soo-Bong holds his bloody shoulder, gasps, sobs in pain.

- Ren-Bo... Gnnn... you have to run away... alone.
(traumatized, blue and purple wings)
- Fly away, go far away!
(looks at the puddle of blood dripping from Soo-Bong's shoulder)
- (desperate moan) I'll be fine!

The two henchmen get dangerously close.

(stunned)

Ren-Bo is unable to move and abandon Soo-Bong.
Despite the pain, Soo-Bong energetically grabs Ren-Bo.

- FLY!!!

With violence, he throws her into the air.
FLAP! FLAP! FLAP!!! By reflex, Ren-Bo's wings flap. She flies away!

- Arrgh... (grabs his sore shoulder)

When Ren-Bo turns her head, she is already far away from Soo-Bong, high up.
She sees him getting smaller and smaller, and more and more cloudy, because of her tears.

The henchmen stop, surprised by Ren-Bo's flight.

- (on his radio) Alert!!! The butterfly is able to fly.
~ No problem, we're back in control.

Soo-Bong leaves grimacing in pain, his hand on his bloody shoulder.
As he limps away, FZZT!, he disappears!



#39. "Real World" - Oh Sung-Moo's toilet + living room (night).

KZZT! Colorful interference, Soo-Bong appears and hits the wall, BOM!

Next to the tablet, the noise startles Yeon-Joo.

(surprised, looks around...)
(the toilet, the real world!!)
: Quick! Change the scene!

He rushes to the bathroom door, puts his bloody hand on the handle, but...
FRRT!, The door handle sizzles and disappears.

- ... !!!

FZZT!, The rest of the set disappears too!

VLAM! Yeon-Joo opens the door brutally but... Surprise! Nobody here!
She sees traces of blood on the floor, on the handle, on the wall...

- ... !!! (puts her hand over in horror and sadness)



#40. "Butterfly Girl" - Village, Sky (late afternoon).

Twenty meters above the ground, Ren-Bo is flying and crying.

She looks down and sees Jin In-Jin's vehicles moving through the village.

She looks for Soo-Bong but doesn't see him!
"Did they shoot him? Is he dead?"

- Soo-Bong! (desperate)



#41. Village, Neighborhood Street (late afternoon).

KZZT! Soo-Bong reappears in another street, next to an old car.
He is no longer behind the fence wall!

He is disoriented, in addition to the injury and pain.
He sees Ren-Bo flying in the sky above him.



#42. Village, Central Street (late afternoon).

Jin In-Jin's vehicles stop, in view of Ren-Bo in the sky.

A rifle slung over his shoulder, Jin In-Jin steps down, with seven armed henchmen.

- Go! With special ammunition!

The henchmen move into aiming position.



#43. Village, Neighborhood Street + Sky (late afternoon).

Ren-Bo and Soo-Bong see each other, brief hope in their eyes.



#44. Village, Central Street + Sky (late afternoon).

FRA-TA-TA-TA-TA-TA!!! A henchmen fires, a burst of automatic fire!

SKOT-SKOT-SKOT! Ren-Bo's wings are pierced by bullets.

She falls in a spin... disordered trajectory... wings flapping halfway...
... only by reflex, because... She has already lost consciousness!!!



#45. Village, Neighborhood Street + Sky (late afternoon).

- NO!!! (horror!)

Soo-Bong sees Ren-Bo falling in his direction.
Her fall is slowed down by her erratic wingbeats.



#46. Village, Central Street (late afternoon).

Jin In-Jin angrily snatches the gun from the henchman who shot Ren-Bo.

- , you vandalize this masterpiece!!!

SBOM! He hits the henchman in the face with the , then throws the gun away.

- ... ?!? (confused, surprised by what he has done)
- I said, special ammunition!
- (points his rifle at the henchman) These ones...

BLAM!!! He shoots the henchman!

SPAT! The henchman is hit in the chest, but shows no pain.



#47. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room + Kang Chul's car (night).

Kang Chul drives his car in the prison parking lot.

On Yeon-Joo's tablet, the henchman shoots Ren-Bo...

- ... !!!

... then the image of her perforated wings.

- NO! Ren-Bo is shot in the sky!
- ... ! (frowns, straight eyes, adrenaline and determination)



#48. Village, Central Street (late afternoon).

The henchman looks at his wound, no trace of blood.
Just a tiny red dot on his shirt.

(becomes livid)

His hands and face become filled with black veins...

His body becomes gray, his eyes opaque...

(his skin withers)

He dries up at an incredible speed!
The horrible transformation ends when the man is completely mummified.

Dead!

- Everyone to the drop point!

The men run towards Soo-Bong and Ren-Bo. The vehicles them.



#49. Village, Neighborhood Street (late afternoon).

Soo-Bong opens his arms, ready to catch Ren-Bo in her fall.
Ouch! The shock is violent. He loses his balance, has to release his injured arm.
They fall into a ditch, between an old car and a hedge.

Horrified, Soo-Bong sees that Ren-Bo is comatose.
He checks her condition, no injury to her body, but her wings are pierced by multiple impacts.
Soo-Bong can't find her breath... he listens to her heart.
Ren-Bo's heart has stopped beating!

- Her... her heart...



#50. "Real World" - Sung-Moo's living room + Kang Chul (night).

- (shouts at smartphone) Ren-Bo's heart has stopped beating!!!
- ... (close-up, hard and calm stare, knows what he has to do)



#51. Village, Central Street (late afternoon).

Jin In-Jin and his men run, followed by vehicles driving at man's speed.
They stop at an intersection leading to the street where Soo-Bong is.

(sees Ren-Bo's body in the distance, smiles cruelly)
(sees Soo-Bong with annoyance, waves his hand)

KRI-CRACK! The henchmen their guns.



#52. Village, Neighborhood Street (late afternoon).

Sitting on the ground, Soo-Bong holds Ren-Bo with one arm.
He looks at her face resting on his knee, feverish and tragic.

- No... My little angel... Not this...

He her face, leaving traces of blood on it.

Desperate, he bursts into tears...



FLASH, End image: Ren-Bo comatose + Soo-Bong crying + Kang Chul resolute + Jin In-Jin sadistic.

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I can't continue a full photo-screenplay now, because it takes too much time.
And I need this time to make corrections on the episodes, better writing.
So I will publish the next parts with a simplified photo-screenplay.

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Mysticlover
#1
so this is good,but Kang Cheol isn't Soo Bom's Hyung because the actor playing Soo Bom is older by seven years, if anything it's the other way around .
MagicalPen
#2
Please dont abandon this . Looking forward to your updates
Bhumig
#3
It’s such a new concept and quite attractive, a sure captivating project!
taeyomg
#4
omg high respect for your devotion & efforts on this project! Looking forward to this as photo-drama is new for me!
mrs_shawty
#5
Chapter 1: I just read the post on your wall hahaha and also the first chapter. So, I just decided to drop the comment here.
Honestly this type of photo-drama is quite new for me (and this site...I think) but so far I think I’ll keep reading this. And I think I love the idea of the photos because your story have a lot of characters, so this really help me to keep me in track of the storyline. But I think this may also somehow affect the interests for the others to read your story since people here more attract to read something in form of novel-like.
Anyway, good luck for your writing! I enjoy reading it. I can tell that this story has an interesting plot eventho it just started.