Twelve Warriors

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Description

The spaceship “Jungle Mansion” is scheduled to arrive at the Free States Gateway (FSG) by HE 5621 to their designated dock Zone 48. The final docking will be steered by its last and youngest Guard team: 12 girls who possess mystical power while equipped with knowledge accumulated by the former JM Guards. It is now HE 5618 when the girls woke up from their hibernation

Foreword

This story was originated from a class exercise when I asked students to bring one item with them and board a spaceship that would leave Earth forever. I asked myself the same question but failed to have an answer. I then decided to explore this issue by writing a novel. The earlier editions (still in progress) were heavily loaded with political agonies: a group of freedom fighters was forced to leave their homeland when it was engulfed by the Alien tyranny. Secretly, the group joined a global alliance of freedom fighters (Free States Gateway) and started to plan the “Big Escape”. Against all odds, the group built a spaceship that resembled an ordinary residential building, nicknamed the “Jungle Mansion”. By some accident, the secret of JM was on the verge of being discovered by the Alien army. Luckily, JM managed to launch right before the political police successfully broke into and seized the spaceship. This is the first fanfic that I have ever attempted to write. I am using JM's journey to the FSG as a background, to stage the adventures, struggles, friendship, and love stories of the twelve young freedom fighters.

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A new prequel of 12 warriors is now published. Please go and check it out!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1434182

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pwmaking #1
I think this story is very inspiring, I wish there is such a spaceship we can escape from Earth! But what happened to the prequel? I clicked and found it's gone.
crownprincessstar
#2
Chapter 7: this is seriously so interesting and so good! can't wait to read more from you authornim
crownprincessstar
#3
Chapter 1: Interesting...
Sallychoi988614 #4
Good starting
eyexofxhorus #5
Chapter 6: I don't often comment myself, but I just need to say that you have a very interesting (and complicated) story line here. I hope you continue to update. =)

P.S. Can I suggest something? Would you consider adding more to your tags? The names of the members, at least. I feel like so many people are missing out on your story. Anyway, just a suggestion. =)
dukduk #6
mate, found this online regarding tears:
https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/science/space/9988194/Astronaut-shows-what-happens-to-tears-in-space.html
"When Hadfield puts water into eyes to represent tears, the water does not trickle down his face, as it would on Earth, but forms a pool of water under his eye and on his cheek. "
BrokeNinja
#7
Chapter 1: This reminds me of the movie Passenger but with an advance plot :o Very fascinating so I look forward onto the progress of this fic ^^
ImFics
#8
Chapter 1: Oh my god the storyline is interesting. This chapter really sparked my interests. Keep up the good work authornim
Asteon
#9
Chapter 1: This sounds interesting