The Chase

Description

"I don't know how it came to be and why, but I remember my past lives like it was just yesterday."  A Park Chorong POV

Foreword

This was supposed to be a one shot but I decided to cut it by parts so it won't be too heavy and too loaded and too emotional. 

Also, this might be a bit messy because I'm not used to this writing style but I just really want to try it.

Thank you so much for dropping by. 

pandaredux
Okay so I've marked this as completed simply because each Act is supposed to stand on its own, a sort collection of interrelated oneshots :) i just don't want my readers to wait for another blue moon to come around for me to write.

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Panda0619
#1
Chapter 2: Ahhh the feeels.. ACT I broke my heart at the end..

And now I'm thinking you are probably a romantic idealist to write like this.. some of the lines are really epic..

I like 'your eyes lit up like evening stars and set my soul aflame' and 'all i want is a blanket of stars and you by my side'.. awwwww

Thanks for another great story!
Sam-TheReader
#2
Chapter 2: Wow... Tha was so deep :c
Ma_rie21
#3
Chapter 2: Hey can some please explain to me what the chapters Act 1 - Act11 mean so, so, so confused. I do love being a reader on asianfanfic and so glad that I can help and support you writers though it. Please update, update update soon and keep up the work of writing if you let me join the circle to support you I would be honnered. Going to keep rooting for you and hope you update soon well done. Let's PARTY xxx
Pandayum
#4
Chapter 2: I’m tipsy so reading this made me scREAM bc one you’re writing again and two it’s so goddamn beaUTIFUL AND ARTSY BUT SAD YET AMAZING I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOUUUU
ckaz99
#5
Chapter 2: OH MY LORD REDUX YOU ARE KILLING ME AGHHHHK
My heart has been crying since the first act, and to have each part as a perfect standalone, is to know that each chapter is carefully crafted to become the new end; to know that it will always be marked completed, but forgive me because my heart will always yearn for more... and more and more... stubbornly refusing to believe it can be finished, searching for a sense of satisfaction and finality that just isn’t there, because the chase seems continuous and never-ending.
Love that transcends across lifetimes… "someone made me believe it so" (oof my heart >-<) It’s twisting me up in knots—the background to Chorong’s ability, what she’s noticed through her lifetimes, and the pain that’s carried on.

Her second lifetime really got to me.
Experiencing a new life again for the first time, a life without everything you thought you knew, and how overwhelming that is. She’s consumed by confusion and suffering, unable to leave that first life behind. The pain held back in her first lifetime became wild and untamed in her second, memories shooting through her painfully without context, and without the foundations her first life had built to withstand such pain. But most of all, it’s a life without Bomi. That truly made the tragedy so much greater.

And in turn, the tragedy made the surprise so much sweeter.
She found her and this time she loved her back... It makes me wonder why there are changes in Bomi, and if that makes Bomi more of a ‘reincarnation’ than Chorong is. Damn, I love this.
pabbochomi
#6
Chapter 1: Oh damn the plot twist ??
phouse
#7
Chapter 2: wow...
how you depicted her emotions, i can feel her
hell I am chorong now, yearning for loml throughout my lifetimes
ChobomPanda
#8
Chapter 2: Damn, how amazing is this. A genius writer indeed. Thank you for this masterpiece, I love how you condemn every emotion. It is beautifully written that I can embrace all the tragedies that you put into. Woww. Great narration plus tragedy is the perfect formula. Thank you, I'm loving this.
NotAFan95
#9
Is there Act II, right? O.o
unknownuserx
#10
I sensed it, but I STILL ReAD it. ;-: