PSYCHO

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He was not the hero of this story neither was he a victim.  He was the villain of his own story.            Who said evil is bad ?


"I do not wish to escape to myself. I wish to escape from myself. I wish to obliterate my consciousness and my knowledge of independent existence , my guilts, my secretiveness. "
        
            - Allen Ginsburg , Jack kerouac and Allen Ginsburg : the letters.

Thank the Lord you can't read his mind because if you do, you will be traumatized.  Not because it is full of scary thoughts, but for it is nothing but

B L A N K !!!
 

 

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Foreword


"The oldest and strongest emotion of mankind is fear and the oldest and the strongest fear is the fear of Unknown!"


"Twinkle twinkle little star, I will find you angel wherever you are!

call me psYcho call me insane, on your heart I will write my name.

I will gather you in my arms and take you far away..

for you are only mine and it'll remain this way..! "

Have you ever wondered what goes inside the mind of a psycho  ? Let's find out !


[The story contains description of death and violence . Read only if you are comfortable with it.]
 

AUTHOR'S NOTE : 

Hello there ! Thank you for clicking on this story and I hope you give it a chance by subscribing. I do appreciate each bit of your support and please do comment and upvote if you think the story deserves it. Feel free to talk to me through comment or PM. Lots of love♡. Here are some other sehunxoc of mine that may catch your taste. 

Stubborn Beloved (competed ) 

Paradox (ongoing )

 

《This story is a work of fiction and any resemblance with other work is a mere coincidence .All Rights reserved . No plagiarism is allowed.》

 

 

 

 



REVIEW :

"The title gives off a feeling of insecurity and that the main character is just that—a psycho, a crazy person.
The description states how the character is but not where the story is going. Overall the story was very interesting. Sehun was seriously a psychotic character, just how you wanted to portray him."

    ~ review by cute bunny multi-shop

 

 

CREDITS :

Thanks for being my beta reader @Charlot1081

 

Submitted in the contest shoes of a unicorn writing contest

Entered in "Escape" writing contest featuring exo.

 

 

Thank you hailstones advertisement for your free advertising service. 

Thanks to cute-bunny multishop for the review.

Author's Thoughts
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Finally I am finished with this one shot. I hope you guys give it a chance and enjoy it as well.
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Ekale_erie #1
Chapter 2: It was really dark, insane and creepy. Amazing work there !
I really felt chills down my spine. Do people insane like this really do exist ?
I wonder when Sehun even couldn't see her cry how he didn't respond to her shrieks. Maybe that's the level of insanity here.
Thesydney #2
Chapter 2: This was interesting.. to say the least.
Thesydney #3
Chapter 1: This prologue sets up why our character is “a psycho,” gives us motive to sympathize and understand them. However there is quite a bit of distractors going on that take away from the center of what you are trying to portray.
Grammar/editing issues being the biggest and then unrealistic expectations of a child being a big second. This reads as a very rough first draft to me.
Thesydney #4
Hi! This is Sydney from ESCAPE! I’m your judge for the contest and I’m reading your story now~
Good luck and I look forward to it :)
Dazed_vexation_ #5
Chapter 2: Fantastic story, love it! All this darkness and love is a wonderful combination. I really like the uniqueness of this story. I am very happy that there are people who have similar tastes to mine and that they write so beautifully.
I only missed the or at least ddlg, because I like Total hardcore. But I LOVE IT 💗 Thanks for your work and sharing your mind with me.
mikh1987 #6
Chapter 2: This story was dark and creepy. However, the writing style is pretty cool, especially the part, where you gave the description of darkness. Or what Sehun thought of darkness. The way he killed Jim, without actually having to touch him, was interesting as well. I think Exo's song Monster and Red Velvet's Psycho fit with this story perfectly. I'm just wondering how did the fire in the orphanage occur anyway. When Sehun was younger, he mentioned how he shut off all his emotions, since turning them on would ruin him as he said they would. He probably never predicted that he would feel love and happiness for Areum. His love for Areum and the happiness he felt around her and pain he felt knowing she didn't love him back and that she loved someone else instead, was also what hurt and destroyed him and turned him into a monster in the end.
key_key1 #7
Chapter 2: Actually iam wondering what trigger him to become monster he was a vhild but already did anything a child didn't know only adult. Was it his parent who leave jim in orphanage? Or he watched something not for his age? Or actually its his nature? And iam wondering where were his parent? He didn't visit them? Suho must be sad to know his girlfriend get murdered by her bestfriend. But this is good story.
SuhoLoverDebo #8
Chapter 2: I read this and seriously I am speechless.. This story is amazingly creepy.. The way Sehun behave is not normal and somewhat his parents to be blamed for this.. Instead of treating him well they left him I'm a orphanage.. He didn't changed even after all those years.. Instead became worse.. He didn't even care about the woman who took care of him all this time.. She should have informed the authority instead of hiding him.. And Areum.. Poor girl.. She thought Sehun is her protector.. Her guardian angel but he anything but that.. She couldn't see the truth all the while and believed his sweet lies.. But Sehun loved her.. It was pure love but the definition of love for him is not same as us.. His love is as twisted as his mind.. Which turned him into a monster in the end.. I can't imagine how he felt after everything.. After realizing what he actually did.. He tried to be a hero, an angel in front of Areum all his life only to end up as a monster in the end.. And you deliver all the emotions so well through your words.. I just loved this story.. Thank you for writing this..
ukisslover26 #9
Chapter 1: i just started reading and it already seems promising as well as creepy,,
Priyanjana18 #10
Chapter 2: I really don't know what to say about this! It's kinda depressing to be honest and that's good because this is this story is about! It's very realistic, things like this do happen, we are just not aware of it. This is not something you usually write! So cheers to you for writing something so different than your genre! Ending is quite practical, what makes it different that generally people write it as the girl changed the guy and they lived happily ever after which didn't happen here, and that's what happens majority of the time in real life! I am really astonished!! Love you sis!! ❤
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