The Third Snow Prince

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In an Alternative Universe where elements are divided into seven kingdoms lives a cursed prince who has never left the borders of his home kingdom. In order to keep balance in the world, the five major kingdoms work to get along and compromise with one another to prevent war. However, a new group of people arises to disturb this peace.

So, what happens when Youngjae, the cursed prince, is forced to risk his life for the peace of his kingdom, when his elder brother is forced to marry a crowned prince who is interested in other women, and what happens when a crowned prince falls in love with a person from a dark guild.

 

 

 

Main ship: Daejae

Side Ships: Yunjae, Dookwang, Banglo

Other (smaller) side ships: Kaisoo, Himup.

Foreword

“Umma.” I said, climbing down from the couch, sitting down on the ground, a foot across from her. “Yes Youngjae?” “Am I going to be here…alone? Forever?”

She stopped what she was doing and looked at me, her eye slightly wide. “What do you mean Youngjae?” She asked, concern in her voice. I fiddled with my hands a little. I didn’t want to make her worry, but it’s been a question that’s been stuck with me for the past few years now.

“When Hyungseung and Kikwang turned 18 Appa and Queen Jang pushed them to start looking for a significant other and they also set up different dates with other princes and princesses and nobles. But…they haven’t done any of that at all with me and I’m 22 now. They haven’t even mentioned it. When I try to ask appa about it, he ignores me and changes the subject. They’re even slowly starting to introduce YeEun to noble heirs and a few princes and princess.” I explained.

“So, am I meant to be alone? Because of the curse?”

My mother sighed, “I figured this would happen.” She said more to herself. I looked at her, listening intently.

“Marriage in royal families are more like business deals and no one knows that you’re sick. So, if they were to marry you off…and something were to happen. Or they were to find out about your condition then it would be found as an insult and a dispute would break out…” She began.

‘And they don’t know when I’m going to die,’ I thought to myself. I didn’t dare to say it, not wanting to upset her.

“…and it’s too dangerous to send you outside to another kingdom.” She finished.

“So, I am going to be alone.” I concluded.

 

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Hi guys! :) I'm back with another story! I'll be adding more tags later on throughout the story, it just depends on how the story goes. I am not sure whether or not to make this rated M, there will be ual references throughout the story but nothing too detailed lol, there are cuss words in it as well. And maybe some Mpreg, but we'll see (I'll add that tag if I do decide to take that route). I hope you guys enjoy the story! 

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I’m tempted to write a second story to this and also a story about YunJae’s past. We’ll see!

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sirchenchen
#1
Chapter 48: OKAY so after nearly a year of saying I'm gonna sit down and read this story I FINALLY DID and read it all in one go (took me like 6 hours with NO BREAKS) so buckle up because I'VE GOT THOUGHTS. Like??? This concept??? I love it??? Elements and magic and kingdoms??? Sign me UP!! It makes me want to write an elemental and magical story of my own and gets those creative gears grinding!! And GOSH I cried genuine tears and felt genuine emotions throughout the whole thing and I AM FEELING THINGS AUTHOR-NIM.
I will say it doesn't quite sit right with me that they're still friendly with Youngjae's family, by that I mean Queen Jang and maybe King Jang but MAINLY QUEEN JANG!! I despised that woman from the beginning and I still do at the end of the story. But it is really true to Youngjae's character to not hate them even after everything. But I think Kikwang really only does it because of Doojoon and his family, otherwise he'd probably never talk to them again. You write family interactions really well! This is something I thought when I read the Jung Family Holiday stories last December, and I still think it now!!
I am curious about how the "hey dad Youngjae's pregnant" conversation that Daehyun would've had with King Jung went, it obviously went well considering the epilogue chapters, but I'm a er for anything that is fluffy DaeJae stuff!! In that vein, I'm also curious about how Daehyun's and Youngjae's wedding went, with the detail you went into for the Earth Kingdom customs for marriage for Doojoon's and Kikwang's wedding, it was probably quite the event! I absolutely love the details and lore and world building and you did spectacularly!!
Also, definitely curious about the various side pairings. I'm sure Himchan and Jongup are thriving, what with Kikwang being their biggest cheerleader. But did Chanyeol ever win Baekhyun's heart? Are Kyungsoo and Jongin living happy lives? Will Yongguk ever come back to Junhong?
I also love how you incorporate characters from all sorts of groups!! Even if I sometimes can't tell if they're from a group or are just Korean names to fill a character spot (I have a select few groups I know names from and am very disconnected from most others except for maybe a name here and there), it doesn't take away from them as a character at all, it just means I've got no appearance to go off of. ^^;
I do admit that the open ending with Changmin does make me anxious. Everything else felt tied up nicely, but that lack of resolution with Changmin sits a bit strangely with me. Like... it makes everyone's happy ending seem like it's on a timer? Which is a bit unsettling for such a peaceful resolution, but I get why it happened that way. Plus, it opens up the possibility to a potential sequel... >_>
Bur overall, I'm really glad I finally sat down and read this story. It's wonderful through and through! Great job, author-nim! ♡
jjbrownsugga #2
Chapter 49: I enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for haring it with us. Also, thank you for providing insight into the Yunjae story with Blue Flame.
natasha07 #3
Chapter 49: can't wait............you are the best.
gwenimnida
#4
Chapter 49: Omg.!!!!
damchuu
#5
Chapter 49: o(≧v≦)o wow , you’re amazing
Fngrl123 #6
Chapter 48: Wow. That was a fun story to read. The ending is just so cute and sweet. ^_^
I love how they all got their own happy ending, well maybe except for Changmin's character. I love how the siblings interact in the story, how they love each other unconditionally. I just...I love it. <3 :)
Fngrl123 #7
Chapter 14: This chapter is sooo cute and sweet.

Dae's line: "...just be my burden..." Just hits the feels train spot on. I was containing my squeals while reading. ^_^
Fngrl123 #8
Chapter 4: I've told myself that I'll comment on the last chapter of this story after I finished reading the whole thing but their interaction here is just so cute. Kyaaaa~~ ^_^ I'm squealing. :))
Yas__22
#9
Chapter 48: I really enjoyed this and the universe this story took place in. Things were well explained and characters were clear. Thank you for writing this amazingly entertaining story! I hope you'll revisit their universe sometime in the future. I've grown attached to the characters haha. ♥
Alejandro59
#10
Chapter 20: Oh por dios el momento que estuve esperando toda mi vidAAAA