winter miracle

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for the first time ever, she wished that time would just stop for just one minute, or even one second. just so she could be with her for a little longer, and kiss her a little harder.

espresxo
Hey guys!! This is my very first fanfic written in English (And my second fanfic ever lol), so i would really appreciate your thoughts and comments on how i should improve the storyline as well as my writing. Thank you! ^^

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mcbuhayan #1
Chapter 5: update ? :(
amiesi #2
Chapter 3: "Be more careful and don’t trip again jinwoo-ya." who jinwoo??
Acg2907 #3
Chapter 4: Haha Kyulkyung was so sly
nielle99chomi #4
Chapter 3: congrats for your first job, writer-nim! anyway your writing style is really nice, I enjoy your fic so much! I hope you can publish the next chapter asap!
twodoogi #5
Chapter 3: Congrats for your first job:):) can't wait for the next chapter!!
Evesom
#6
Chapter 3: Chapter 3: I am excited to read the next chapter <3 keep up the good work!
Acg2907 #7
Chapter 2: Awww i’m soft for these little ones >.<
twodoogi #8
Chapter 1: Your storyline is Great!! And your writing is Perfect!!!. Im excited for the next chapter!!
Acg2907 #9
Chapter 1: Great story plot!!! Im curious of what’s going to happen next!!!!! Keep up with the good work author-nim!!